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aka AgentPlayer37

Branch: Ekaterina

Okay.
Hello, everyone! 
I am starting my very own Writing Contest. Just because I can't seem to find any that will actually work for me.
Before I start, however, I am giving people the opportunity to put forth seuggestions.
For instance, do you think I should have one round, or multiple? If so, how many?
What catagories would you like to see?
I will ultimately decide, of course, but I'm open to suggestion.
If no-one posts anything in two days, I will decide.
If they do, I will give it three.
All entries must be Fan-Fiction.
If anyone has questions, please feel free to ask.
If anyone has preferences, please post them now.
Thanks!

L3 :)

'The closer you look, the less you'll see, so take a step back, and look through me.'

 
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Hey Paz! Yep, it's me again! I just love writing contests and I know you'll do great at hosting one! Here's some suggestions. I think you should have three rounds, have a decent deadline, and wait, fan-fiction? I don't really like to do fan-fiction. Can we do something else?

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Getting back at me,are you, L3? JK. I guess I could do fanfiction. I Vote multiple rounds!
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Okay, 3, 2, 1, Let's Jam

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You should do a couple of rounds. When is it do?

Oh, and by the way...

MB Oscars are being held at 59955! Plz Come!!!!

-Ace @~)~~~~  
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Don't you ever wonder how we survive?~Paramore

 

Sugar we're going down swinging.~Fall Out Boy

 

Losing the feeling of feeling unique. ~Panic! At the Disco

 

It's not confidential that I've got potential.~The Killers

 

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aka AgentPlayer37

Branch: Ekaterina

Hey, 99!

Yes, I'd noticed. You're on about all of the ones I've looked at, and I look at pretty much all the ones I see, I just don't enter them, for various reasons.
Ex. : Short stories only. Original stories only. Humour stories only.
Things like that.
And in answer to your question, we could do both, if you'd like. In fact, thank you, because that's an even better idea. Something for everyone. :)
And thanks for the compliment, by the way. ;)

Everyone else,

Also, if I can, I'd like to get at least five people in. Thanks! ;)

L3 :)

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aka AgentPlayer37

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Amethyst,

Getting back at you? For what? I take it I know you?
Sorry, really, I'm having trouble placing the Agent Name.
Wait! Nour...N.O.U.R....That...Sounds...Familiar! I just...Can't...Remember...Where from! It's annoying!
I'm really sorry, my mind isn't working right now.
Remind me?
Oh, and see below, posted to 99. We are now doing both. :)
By the way, tomorrow I will post the results of the poll, and we will begin.

L3 :)

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aka KittenFuchsia10

Branch: Janus

L3: No prob. I'm kind of a forgettable person(sigh.) despite my name, which is uncommon even in Egypt(sigh), where I live. You semi-not-really signed up for my writing contest. We're also in Kanon's More Than Meets The Eye RP together(if you'll remember, I'm the kid with the pet falcon). Nice POV, btw. Anywho, I said you were getting back at me because at MY writing contest I said it can't be fanfiction, only original, and you said you didn't have any original stories, and now in this one you say it has to be fanfiction and fanfiction is not my area of expertise(again, sigh). No worries. I'll just assume we're friends. I'm friends with whoever I meet on here. 
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Quick question, when is it do?

-Ace @~)~~~~ 
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Don't you ever wonder how we survive?~Paramore

 

Sugar we're going down swinging.~Fall Out Boy

 

Losing the feeling of feeling unique. ~Panic! At the Disco

 

It's not confidential that I've got potential.~The Killers

 

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Nour!

Right, that was you! I knew you sounded familiar. Anyway, like I said before, don't worry, I changed it so that everyone can participate with ease.
I remember with the RP, don't worry. I liked the falcon. Red, is it?
Thanks, by the way. :) :)

L3 :)

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aka AgentPlayer37

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Okay, guys, I'm here! I'm late, I know, and I'm really, really sorry, I just had so many things to reply to I thought I was waiting for someone here, and completely forgot it was you guys waiting for me.
Forgive me? Please?
My first contest, trust me to mess it up. (Glares at self.)
But I'm here now, and we can start.
Okay, so please put your name and age. I couldn't really care less if it's your real name, but please put your real age, because it'll help me judge how good your story is for the age you are.
There will be three rounds.
The first of these will be Romance. Nothing inappropriate, because I was reading this book for a book club yesterday, and all of a sudden the guy starts describing...Things. And so I was like 'AAAAAHHH!!!' and immediately stopped reading. So nothing like that.
And 99, I know you can write a good enough romance story, so don't go thinking you can't.
Again, it can be Fan-Fiction, or it can be original, whichever you'd prefer.
The first round starts now, and it's deadline is...The 21st of March. Two weeks from now.
Good luck!
Also, with the amount of people we have right now, there will be one place only as a winner.
However, OTHERS ARE WELCOME TO JOIN should they come in late, as long as they are willing to take the disadvantages of this. :)
Please let me know if there's anything I've forgotten. ;)

L3 :)

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Also,

As a footnote, I would like to add that I WILL judge complete lack of grammar. To those of you who do not understand grammar, I will not judge too hard, but as it does help read a story, I feel some is necessary.
Once again, good luck!

L3 :)

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Branch: Tomas

Fan fiction? o.k. when is the deadline?





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Dragane

SHADESLAYER

DaughterofPoseidon

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DragonChaser and Rider For 402 years 

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YourMomChoseLife!:D

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*glances up hopefully* Just to be clear, it doesn't have to be fan-fic? Because I'd like to answer, but I'd have to pass if it were fan.fictions only.

Oh, and three is the lucky number, so they say. ;) 
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If you have a dream, don't wait. Act.

 

 

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*sighs* since i have no life i will join. also it's hard to press the shift key with only one hand. sorry.
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[semi-active]

 

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I would like to join!
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"A group of children who should be playing video games and avoiding math homework took you on and they won."

 Salvation is found in no one else, for there is no other name given to men by which we must be saved. Acts 4:12

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Fighting,

I know you from somewhere...I know I do. I'll figure it out. ;)
And no, it DOES NOT HAVE TO BE FAN-FICTION. No worries, I'm not annoyed or anything, I just wanted to put it in bold so anyone else would be able to see more easily. ;)
Okay, so no, it doesn't, I think I was temporarily out of my mind, because the whole purpose in doing this was to have one that pretty much everyone who wanted to join, could join.
So ignore what it says up top. :)
And I know, isn't it great? Three is one of my very favourite numbers. Along with twelve. ;)

L3 :)

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aka AgentPlayer37

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DragonChasing,

It doesn't have to be if you don't want.
I did write that above, but the deadline for the first round is the 21st of March.
Best of luck! :)

L3 :)

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aka AgentPlayer37

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Elaia!

You're in Elwing's Lord of the Rings club, aren't you? Nice to see you. :)
No problem, I understand completely about the one-handed thing.
Also, if you didn't see the other three times I posted it above, this does not have to be Fan-Fiction.
And the deadline is the 21st of March. :)

L3 :)

'The closer you look, the less you'll see, so take a step back, and look through me.'

 
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If it is not fan fiction, what is the theme?




-Jane 
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Dragane

SHADESLAYER

DaughterofPoseidon

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Hobbit In Disguis

DragonChaser and Rider For 402 years 

CH-BSPQR

Archer

ExecutiveProtector|WeProtectTheMBfamily!Info@/114657

YourMomChoseLife!:D

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aka CobraAdventure50

Branch: Lucian

Here is the Romance thing...



We decided to leave the spring dance early, it was lame anyways. Most high school dances are. Normally I don't go to dances but my boyfriend said we should go, so we could spend some more time together. Of course I said yes.  


We sneaked out the back door, tworads the woods with the big open field behind it. We walked in silence for a few minutes till he surprised me by saying, "I have a surprise for you, but you have to wear a blindfold."

"What, you don't think that I wouldn't keep my eyes closed?" I replied. 
"I don't think. I know that you arn't going to keep your eyes closed." he said teasingly.
"Well ye of little faith, how will I know if I am about to run into something?" I replied, while putting on the blindfold.
"Well I am going to carry you of course."

Before I could say anything, he hooked his arm under my shoulders and legs, and he lifted me up. I wrapped my arms around his neck.

"Ugh, you weigh a ton," he said, you could hear the teasing tone in his voice. I punched him in the arm, hard. Then he faked dropped me. I squeled so loud, I was surprised we didn't get caught by the school officials. 

"Are we there yet?" I asked.
"Almost, just a little bit farther," he replied.

After a few more minutes of walking he set me down on something that felt like a blanket.

"Can I take off me blindfold now?" I asked.
"Yeah, prepare to be amazed," he replied.

I untied my blindfold, I looked around and saw the most sweetest thing ever! He set me down in the middle of the field behind the woods on top of an old blanket. On the blanket was our favorite dinner, a 12 pack of coca-cola and a large cheese pizza. He sat down next to me and I leaned against him. We ate all of our food, then he reached behind him and grabbed a small white box and handed it to me. 

"What is it? I asked.
"Well your not going to know unless you open it," he said with a crooked grin plastered on his smug face. 

I stuck out my tounge at him and opened the box. Inside was a beautiful crosage. It had a big red rose in the middle with little white flowers surrounding it. He took it and slipped it on to my wrist. 

"Thank you," I said.
"Isn't that what boyfriends are supposed to do?" he said.

He reached behind him again and brought out one of those small speakers.

"What else do you have over there?" I asked, teasingly.
"Wouldn't you like to know?" he said, with a sly grin.

He turned on our slow song and stood up. He put out his hand and offered to help me up. I took his hand and he pulled me up to my feet. He wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me in close.I put my arms around his neck and leaned my head against his shoulder. Then we danced the night away to our favorite song in our favorite place. 

I hope this is good enough!

-Ace @~)~~~~ 
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Don't you ever wonder how we survive?~Paramore

 

Sugar we're going down swinging.~Fall Out Boy

 

Losing the feeling of feeling unique. ~Panic! At the Disco

 

It's not confidential that I've got potential.~The Killers

 

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aka AgentPlayer37

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Athena,

You may OF COURSE join if you would like to.
Welcome.
See above posts for theme and deadline. ;)

L3 :)

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aka CodeChallenger10

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      Aww. . . *still groans even when Paz says I can do a decent romance story* darn!  Romance really isn't my thing but I'll do my best. Is it okay if I reuse the story that I had in Rachael's writing contest? If not, that's totally alright too. I need to practice on romace anyways.
      Name's 99 (I'm so redundant) and I'm 165. Er, how did I get that five there?! I mean 16. I don't mean to be rude but are you a boy or a girl, Paz?

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Know me from somewhere? *thinks* My story, probably. Updated it, BTW. :D
Right, contest time!


My heart isn't broken in two. It's shattered into a trillion million pieces. I'm not even sure that's a number, but..... Humans never make sense anyway.

Who broke my heart? It was a long time ago that I stood in front of that gravestone in the evening light. Hundred of years have passed between him and I.

Humans go so quickly, I remember thinking. They fall so deep asleep. Shocked as I was at the puny human lifespan, I never showed it.

We were monsters, the two of us. I, the snaked-haired demon who could turn the villagers to stone, and him, the one who was different from all the others. The only one who wasn't afraid of me, all those years ago at that graveyard. The only one who didn't run away. I looked past the differences he had from me.

Then the war came. He went to fight, despite me begging him to reconsider. when he came back, he was still the same boy that I loved. Yet he had aged so fast.

Time went on. We watched the sunrise together, lived alone in that small house hid in the farway trees. We started a family.

But looking at our little daughter, I turned to him and said: "You alone will grow and then fall so deep asleep," I never showed the shock, but I started to weep.

I knew he would die eventually. All humans do, even our daughter, who was a half-blood, died. But I created a never-ending world for our family. Called upon the power of the snakes I had at hand. I didn't worry about what would happpen if the power disappeared. In that world we could've been together forever.

So I waited for him. Years and years passed, but he never came. I counted the clouds. Time seemed to stop. Even the sunrise reminded me of him, made me want to cry. And then I finally realized what had happen

He had left me long ago.

So now I live alone, but that's nothing new for me. I deserted this world, and went to live in my own. So yes, he's the one who broke my heart into all those pieces.

But each piece still beats for him. 

Ah, love stories, my old nemesis. I based this one off another one. Hope that's allowed. :)
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Everyone,

Sorry, I'm sorry I haven't been on, really, really, I've tried, but I've been so busy.

Jane,

The theme is ROMANCE.
ROMANCE FOR ANYONE OUT THERE WHO COMES IN AND NEEDS TO SEE IT IN BOLD.
Cheers!

L3 :)

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Ace,

Well, I've read this three times already, but it's decent, and I like it, and I like the part you added at the end.
Good job!

L3 :)

It takes bravery to show a weakness.

 
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99,

I don't really care which story you use. It can be either one. I mean, Ace used one they've posted at least two other times, so I don't see why you shouldn't be able to do the same.
(Laughs.)
Really? Are you sure you're not secretly 165? (Laughs again.)
No, I'm playing, you're 16, I know, I saw it on the other forms. ;)
No worries, not rude at all, I am a girl, and I am 15. ;)

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Ah, Fighting, I know you very well by now.
I'm very sorry I haven't been on, I've been busy. Forgive me?
Anyway, yes, FAN-FICTION IS ALLOWED TOO. Did you know people seem to keep getting confused? All because of that first post. It's annoying. ;)
But fun. Very fun. :)
Nemesis? Ooh, define?
Anyway, no it is fine, I like it very much.
Good luck to you, and all of those who join.

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Don't worry I forgive you. :)
Nemesis because I really suck at writing love stories. And yet so many people have been giving me that very topic. :p 
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If you have a dream, don't wait. Act.

 

 

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 I'm gonna try, but I won't be surprised if I don't qualify. Here goes. (this is original)

                                                                               
Cleo never stood out, even if she tried. She was shy and quiet and afraid of nearly everything. She didn't have a lot of friends. Only two, and they were brother and sister. Thet'd moved away only a month ago, leaving Cleo alone.
The dance was going well, at least. Nobody bothered to call her anything, and she was fairly unnoticed. She hadn't spilled anything on her dress yet. She speculated about how long this relatively good luck would continue as she surveyed the couples slow-dancing on the dance floor. She sighed. Another lonely evening.
She was so immersed in her own misery that she didn't notice until the boy said, " Er...hey."
She looked at the boy in surprise. He wore glasses that were too large for his face, and was nervously running a hand through his short black hair.
She spoke in her timid, quiet tone. "Can I help you?"
"No, it's just that, er, I've been standing her for twenty minutes and I just thought I'd um, introduce myself."
Her eyes widened. "Okay. What's your name, then?"
"Marcus. Yours?"
"Cleo."
After a moment's awkward silence, Marcus spoke again. "So, uh, your date ditched you too?"
Cleo shook her head. "I only came because my older brother asked me to coach him on how to be gentleman. Why would your date ditch you?"
Marcus shrugged. "My sister set us up, but it didn't work out."
"Oh. Okay." 
"So," he said. "You into Doctor Who?"
Two hours later, Cleo and Marcus were talking animatedly about various fandoms. Cleo couldn't believe it. He shared all her obsessions, her favorite books and television shows.
Cleo heard her brother saying it was almost curfew. She smiled at Marcus. "So," she said. "We'll be meeting again, right?"
"Yeah. See you."
Cleo smiled shyly as walked after her brother. And when Marcus waved, she felt a slight blush rise to her cheeks. Maybe she had found a friend after all. 
 
Okay, not my best work, but seriously this is NOT my area of expertise. 
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Okay Paz! Here it is and I hope it's not too cheesy. Thanks for letting me reuse this. I hope I make the cut!

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racie breathed in the fresh, crisp air of the warm day. Such air was found only in these mountains. The tall, majestic trees towered over her with their branches twisting out intricately in splendid wonderment. She smiled ecstatically. This was her kind of field trip.
        She turned to her best friend, Sara, who was also looking around in rapturous awe. 
        “Isn’t this just amazing?” Tracie asked, shaking her soft brown hair for emphasis. “I can’t believe our school had actually funded this finally! I’ve only dreamed of coming to such a place.” 
         Sara nodded in silent agreement but Tracie could tell something was on her mind. Her friend usually wasn’t so silent. She noted the thoughtful expression on her friend’s face.     
        “What’s up? You look like the Great Thinker,” Tracie asked teasingly. 
        Sara seemed to jump out of her trance at the question. She sighed softly. “I don’t know. It’s just that—” she smiled in slight embarrassment, “I can’t stop thinking of Terry.” 
        Tracie secretly rolled her eyes. Her friend had the biggest crush of all crushes on their classmate, Terry Brookes. Blond, broad-shouldered, and tall, Terry was the target of Sara’s obsessions. The problem was, Terry was extremely bashful while Sara was 99.9 % chatterbox. Not a good combination. 
        “He’s so handsome,” Sara continued dreamily. “I wish I could talk to him more. But he always seems so nervous when I’m around. How do you do it?” She turned to Tracie, a hint of envy in her eyes. 
        “I don’t know.” Tracie became slightly uncomfortable. She was always good socializing with other people and she’d talked to Terry a few times, much to Sara’s consternation. She winked good-naturedly at her friend. “You just have to act yourself—that’s the key to it all.” 
         The evening was dwindling so the two girls decided to head back to camp. Their hiking boots crunched along the twisting trail and, after an hour’s hike, Tracie could see the tall plumes of campfire smoke coming from the numerous campsites that their class occupied. The two friends separated after entering camp, both eager for some rest. The hike had been somewhat tiring. 
        After dinner, Tracie decided to take a little stroll to one of her favorite spots. She absolutely loved nature and she couldn’t wait to see the lovely scenery at sunset. As she walked along rapidly, she saw Terry coming in the opposite direction, looking rumpled and out of sorts. Figuring Sara had probably hounded him all dinner, Tracie impulsively decided to take him along. 
        “Hey Terry! How’s it going?” She greeted him with a friendly wave. 
        He looked up, a curious relief flooding his face. “Oh, hi Tracie, I’m just, uh, you know—” 
        “You look tired. Want to come see one of the most beautiful spots on Earth? By yours truly,” Tracie asked somewhat teasingly.                                                                                                                                                  Her companion smiled rather bashfully. “Sure.” 
        The two trudged up the winding trail with Tracie in the lead. The shadows began to grow long, indicating that it was becoming twilight. After a steep hike, Tracie led Terry to a small cliff alcove surrounded by tall, graceful trees. 
         “This,” Tracie announced softly, “is the most beautiful place on Earth.” 
         The scene was breathtaking. It overlooked a vast forest that had an immense river carved in it. The sun was slowly sinking on the mountain range, it golden rays still bright. 
        “Wow. This is amazing,” Terry said, awed. 
        Tracie sat down, nestling her head in her arms. Her eyes roved the mountain range, finally latching on the setting sun. “Many think that nature is boring and dull but to me, its peacefulness and beauty . . . makes me feel so alive.” 
        “I was never really big into nature but now . . .” Terry sat next to her, “I think I’m a fan now.” 
        Tracie laughed. “I guess I was your field guide. I did pretty good, eh?”  
        “Yeah, you sure did.” Her companion looked down, embarrassed. 
        There was a few minutes of awkward silence. Tracie decided to break the silence. “You know, Terry,” she said gently in her friendly, earnest tone, “being shy isn’t something to be ashamed of. It just means you’re respectful and thoughtful. Embrace it.” 
        “I’ve never thought of it like that. Thanks.” Terry beamed at her remark. 
        Tracie looked away from the sinking sun and glanced at Terry. Their eyes seemed to connect, lost in each other’s thoughts. Looking into Terry’s kind emerald eyes, Tracie felt a warm, fluttery sensation. The moment dragged on. They both leaned in simultaneously and the moment ended in a sweet, tender kiss. 
        At that moment, the sun blinked out of view on the horizon, its rays fading. It was a sign of new beginnings.                                             
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Fighting,

Thanks! ;)
Well, I just chose it because I figured with all the Amy-Jake Amy-Ian stories on here, it would be something more people would be interested in. You know, for a first round?
Sorry. :/ ;)

L3 :) :) :)

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Body & soul so strong that it takes my breath away

& I breathe u,into my heart & pray 4 the strength 2 stand today

Cuz I love u, whether it's wrong or right,& thou I can't be w/ you tonight

Know my heart is by your side

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aka AgentPlayer37

Branch: Ekaterina

Amethyst,

Oh, don't worry, it's not that bad. ;)
It's different, too.
And I understand, because somehow I always end up totally blanking on my better work when I write on here. ;)
Plus it depends on how many people show up, and how good they are. Right now I don't think I have a lot of entries. So don't lose hope, yet! :)

L3 :) :)

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Body & soul so strong that it takes my breath away

& I breathe u,into my heart & pray 4 the strength 2 stand today

Cuz I love u, whether it's wrong or right,& thou I can't be w/ you tonight

Know my heart is by your side

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aka SecretEmerald15

Branch: Lucian

The first time I saw her was in English, my first class of the day. She was standing at the teacher’s desk in the front of the room, with long dark hair covering her face and books hugged to her chest. I remember so clearly what she was wearing; a light gray T-shirt with a darker gray bow around the empire waist and dark blue skinny jeans, shop-faded on the thighs and calves.

She was, without a doubt in my mind, beautiful.

I must have been staring like an idiot, because Olivia, the girl across from me poked me hard in the arm. “Stop staring!” she scolded, most likely because girls who like you don’t want you staring at another girl, especially if she’s new and pretty like this one was.

Miss Logans clapped her hands twice sharply. “Everyone, this is Desdemona. Her name is especially beautiful because it comes from Shakespeare, Othello. Now, Desdemona, where did you move from?”

She stayed looking down at the ground, but said in a clear voice, “Maryland. Near Annapolis.”

“Oh, that’s not too far. I’m afraid Florida is a bit warmer than the Chesapeake Bay, though.” Miss Logans laughed a bit.

“No. My grandparents live here, which is why we moved. Grandad just had surgery.” Desdemona brushed her hair out of her eyes for a second, then let her fringe fall back down to cover them.

She kept her head down and her hair over her eyes for the rest of the lesson, the rest of the day, and the rest of the week. But as I was walking to the library, I spotted her for once with her hair not obstructing her gorgeous face.

She had her head up, eyes searching the sky as they followed two dark, wheeling shapes through the clouds. The wind was whipping her hair around, but as I reached her, it blew it back, so that I could see clearly into her eyes.

Dark chocolate, with the slightest flecks of green. As our eyes met, she blushed a dark pink and dropped her gaze, moving her books from her hip, like the Statue of Liberty’s pose, back to in front of her.

“Sorry,” she mumbled, still red. “I wasn’t looking where I was going.”

“It’s okay,” I answered easily. “Desdemona, right? I’m Jacob.”

“I prefer Dezzie, but yeah. My parents are total Shakespeare freaks,” she laughed. Her voice was high and clear, and her laugh was the same.

“Mine were just normal. Sort of. My last name is Thyime, and my brother’s name is Justin.” I shook my head sadly as Dezzie burst into laughter.

“You’re kidding!”

“Unfortunately not.” I sighed. “Where were you headed? Library?” I glanced over at the stout brick building across the road.

“No, I was heading to the coffee shop,” Dezzie answered, gesturing at the coffee shop/grocery store/craft store near us.

“Could I come with? A donut sounds really good right now,” I told her.

She laughed again and linked her arm through mine, dragging me towards the shop.

We entered the room, full of patrons and the smell of coffee. The barista behind the counter was busy filling cups and passing food along the counter, laughing with the customers.

We chose a tall table at the back, sitting on the high chairs with it. Dezzie kept up a continual chatter about school, and drinks, until the line thinned out and we went up to place our orders.

“Hot chocolate please!” Dezzie piped up. “And Jacob wants a donut. Chocolate, right?”

“Yup, chocolate will work,” I agreed. I pulled out my wallet as the server filled a cup with cocoa and slid a donut onto a plate. Grabbing a five, I slid it across the counter before Dezzie could object.

“Nope, I’m paying,” I announced when she opened her mouth. “Shhh.”

She smiled and accepted her hot chocolate.

“So, am I allowed to call you Cocoa?” I asked, cutting my donut into pieces and offering Dezzie one.

“Cocoa?” she smiled, as if already knowing why that nickname.

“Everything about you is chocolate. Your hair is semi-sweet, your eyes are dark chocolate, and you like hot chocolate.” I grinned as Dezzie laughed again.

“Sure, Past.”

“Past?”

“Because it’s past time for you to go home,” she giggled, pointing at the clock behind my head.



Glancing at it, my eyes bugged out; way past time for me to be home. “Darn!”

I gathered up my things and waved at Dezzie. “See you tomorrow!”

“You too.” She gave me that sweet smile of hers and took another sip of her hot cocoa.  
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99,

It's not. (Laughs.)
I think I already told you that. ;)
You're welcome, not a problem.

L3 :) :) :)

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Okay, cool, thanks Elaia! ;)

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Know my heart is by your side

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I'm Jane and I would rather not give my real name, but I'm pretty close to 13.
ROMANCE?! out of all the themes, ROMANCE! Pleas don't judged hard because I don't like writing love stories, and frankly, I'm not  good at them either. I'll do some fan-fic.


 Park stood there, petrified. She watched as, her boyfriend turned off the safety on the gun he was pointing strait at her. I had always been afraid of him braking her heart, but him never piercing it. Park's life flash before her eyes, starting when she was still in Cahill training: Traves and Park had always been best in the class, and best friends. They even picked the same Cahill missions so they could be together.        When they were 12 they picked the detective course and Park had the case of the missing building, he had his missions.
He never really liked detective work he wanted to do gun practice. Park thought he was doing it so they could be together, but now she knows real reason.
When Park and Traves were 13, they were sitting in the court yard watching the stars when Traves asked Park what her big secret was. She thought that it was time to tell him, so, Park said," I'll tell you mine if you tell me yours." he said,"O.k. You go first."
So Park told him her secret. it was the biggest mistake of her life. His lips inches away from Parks, she told him, "My secret is this: I am Dan and Amy's long lost sister. I was born a lot like Olivia had Madeline. Hope never told Trent. And when she told him he got mad for her not telling him so she gave me up for adoption, a Cahill agent raised me and trained  me. my cover is Park, but my real name is River." She asked him what his secret was, he got up, backed away, and said as he pulled out a gun,"I'm a Vesper." and then he shot. Park was always worried of him braking her heart, but him never piercing it.


I hope you liked it! 
-Jane 
P.S. I'm just saying, but some how Park survives.
P.S.S. I hope the grammer is good! 
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Jane,

I don't really bump my stuff, I post things instead, but thanks for keeping me up here. :)
I'm sorry, I only did it because I thought more people would be interested in it. :/
I don't judge hard, not typically. For one, I know what it's like to be judged hard. Two, while I do look at grammar and writing style, and talent and things like that, I also try to look at the base of the story. The idea behind it. Whether it's a good concept, what it shows about the person who came up with it.
Those sorts of things.
I must say I really don't look forward to having to cut people out.
I apologize in advance to everyone.
Anyway I did like it. Brilliant, Park survives. Interesting, I wonder how that would happen. I mean, with mine it was, for all intents and purposes, magic. She had magic, and that's how she saved him.
But in theory you don't, so...The possibilities...
Anyway, the grammar was decent, but a little off, at least to me reading it.
I'll read it again when judging time comes.
BY THE WAY PEOPLE JUDGING IS TWO DAYS SINCE I'VE ALREADY READ ALL THE ENTIRES LIKE TWO TIMES.
BY THE WAY YOU CAN ALSO ENTER THINGS ON THE 21ST, JUST NOT AFTER THAT.
Sorry Jane, that's my shout-out to everyone so hopefully I don't get asked ten times over. ;)
Oh well. If I do, no big deal I suppose. :)

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Know my heart is by your side

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