I think you should end it with Ian and Natalie going back to london in a matter of time. Though it would be nice if you could end it with the two couples happy then Ian and Natalie go home. Hopefully you will find the perfect ending.
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fightingares28 AKA DetectingDolphin36
forever a christian!
We were meant to live for so much more, Have we lost our selves?
Everyone: I hate doing this to you, but I can't post on the 30th. *angery peeps start to walk twords me* Wait! before you kill me, let me tell you why.
The eight gradeers are going to grad. and the school band is going to be playing the grad. song. And as you may know, I am in the band so I have to go. I was going to post before I go, but I have to be at my school by 5:00 so I won't have time to post because I have to go to another prac. right after school, like at 2;12.
I know you guys were looking fowrde for this but you have to wait one more day. Please forgive me for the sudden interfearince
All the hope for her to say yes, vanshed when I saw her hisatate. I get go of her shoulder blades and take a step back. "Sorry for wasting your time, Natalie"
I'm already at the end of the hallway, when I hear her cry,"Yes! I do!" I turn around and see her walk quickly twords me. She hugs me, but lets go before I can hug her back. She smiles at me and says, "I realized that I do love you. I was so blind not to see it before!"
I don't say anything, just wrap my arms around her and pull her close. We stand like that for a few moments and then Natale says," You know that at this time, the boy is to kiss the girl." I smile.
"I like the way you think," and bend down a kiss her. If there were awards for kissing, this one would have won. When i manged to pull back, she acculy looked a little disapointed and I couldn't help but smile.
"Wait till Ian and Amy find out that We fell for each other," I say, hoping that there expressions would be priceless. "I'm sure that they will be really shocked. I bet that they will thing that it's a prank!" says Nataile, giggling.
A prank . . . . Suddenly I had an idea.
"Natalie," I say, "Grab a bucket. We have some pranking to do."
There. I hope this makes up for the lack of posts. Oh, sorry 'bout the clift hanger.
WinningOutsmarting16: If you want I geuss I could write another one. Right now I'm working on a new stroy. Its about A princess, forced to marry, evil mother, have to save people. It's sort off like Not a Princess thing(sorry Maxinne)
Everyone: My next post would be the last. Will try to make long. Oh, I've decided to keep tittle, cuse it would go nice with what I'm planing . . . Anyways, thank for reading this. It means a lot to me 'cuse this is first story that I acculy got to finsh. So thanks!