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Brianna, I'm really sorry that I haven't replied in a while. But this story is AMAZING and you HAVE to continue it. I absolutely loved Dan's POV: "No comment"! You've got the characterization down! And hmm...story titles...what about...hmm..."An Unexpected Turn"? Or..."Unlikely Soulmates"? Or..."Opposites Really Do Attract"?
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"So since I'm still here livin'

I guess I will live on

I could've died for love--

But for livin' I was born"

-Langston Hughes

Aliya


"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is God's gift; that's why we call it the present."

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I think that two more posts and the story would be finshed. Please come up with a title!!


 
One month later


Nellie's POV:

"Hey Kiddo. Hows it going?" I say when I see Dan come in the kicion. Dan looks at me and says, "Okay," Now I know that theres a problem.

I grab a chiar from the table and tell him to do so to. Dan sighs and sits. I lean forward, placing my hand around my chin. "Is the Kabra still not talking to you?"I say. Dan shakes his head and says, "No. It's more like me igonring her."   

"Come on kiddo, " I say, "Just becuse you admitted to be in love with Nattalie, dosen't mean it's the end of the world. It's been a month since the "confesion". Shouldn't you move on or something?" I can tell I'm not making any progess.

"Hey, scholl is starting again in three months." I say trying to bribe him, "How 'bout we shop early for back-to-school stuff? What ever you want." I was siure that it would work but Dan just looked down at the table. I sigh.

"Look, I'm the best I can here. Why don't you just lesson to what ever Nataile has to say to you? It can't be bad."

Dan slowly nods and gets off the chair he was siting in. "Okay Nellie, I'll try it. I'll see what Nattaile has to say to me." He turns and leaves. Then he comes back and says, "By the way, your a great Au Pair." and leaves out the kitton.

I smile to myself. Nellie, I think, you've done it again.   

Dan's POV:

Deep breath, Dan, deep breath. After my talk with Nellie, I headed to the Kabra's room. Amy and Ian had gone to the park earlyer so it was just me, Nelle and Natalie. I was so confadent but now standing in frount of Natalie's door, my confadents was falling. 

I lift my hand, for the millin time, and start to knok. But this time I won't walk away. A few moments later, the door opens to revail Nataile. I had forgoten how beautiful she looked.

Her black hair as tied in a high poney tail. She had faded jeans and an old T-shirt but she still manged to take my breath away.

"Nataile . . . " I start to take a step twords her but she slaps me.


Mawhaha!

I think I'm getting better with these clift hangers.  

      

       

  

          
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@Maxine: It's okay if you don't get a title right away. Also, please go to /46630. We need your opineon.

@Aliya: I looked at you titles and I liked An Unexpected Turn.  

@Every one als: this story is relly short. So the next two or three post would be the ending. So please come up with more tites! I have one that might do the trick from Aliya.



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Oooh! Bree, sis, please continue! Maybe "Double Dates" or "Cahill Couple Problems" could be titles. I know, they sound so cheesy, but that's what I could give right now.

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I could've died for love--

But for livin' I was born"

-Langston Hughes

Aliya


"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is God's gift; that's why we call it the present."

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I don't think that the titles sound Chessy at all MLJQ. I think Cahill Couple Problems would be good it we changed it up a bit . . .



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Oh, I love this story, and I like the title you have now.

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OMG!!!! I came here and was reading some of the post and I COMPLETLY forgot that was sapost to post yesterday! I'm so sorry! I'll post some right now.

Here is some more, but it's going to be a ____ in the end . . .


Natalie's POV:

"So You want all of the shoes?" says the female voice at the end of my cell phone. I sigh impationtly. "Yes," I say into my phone. Apperantly, americans don't know how to dilver shoes with out questions. "You do know that is going to cost a lot? Like a lot lot?" says the female voice, unsure.

I had lost all my paitons with this lady and was about to yell my head of, when I heard a knock on my door. "Just canceil the order," I say, "And thank the person who just knoked on my door because they just saved your job." I close my cell phone and toss it on my bed.

I open the door and see that it was Dan who knoked on my door. Anger builds in side of me. And hurt. Anger 'cuse he thinks that he could just come to my door and think that it would be okay. Hurt because he igrord me when I tried to explane my feelings twords him. All that hurt and anger is threating to come out. And I'm welcoming it.

Dan says my name and I let all that hurt and anger lose and slap him. He steps back, a red mark on his handsome, flawless face . . .

Snap out of it, I think, Dont let him get to you that easly. I cross  my arms aross my chest and say coldly, "What do you want, Daniel?" He flinches at the coldness in my voice. "I-I just want to talk to you." The anger is getting bigger then the hurt.

"Oh, so now you talk to me?" I say ,"After a month of igroreing me you fanly waant to talk to me. Well I got news for you Daniel, I don't want to talk to you. Now or ever."

I try to close my door but Dan sticks his foot out. "Please Nataile just lesson to me. I-I was embarssed that I just blurted out . . ." He skakes his head. "It was stuped. But I have to know," He grabs my sholder blades and looks at me in the eye. He says, "Natalie, do you love me as I love you?"       


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Janna: i acully think that I "m going to keep the story going for a while longer
Everyone: Proply wount post till starday. Was going to powt tomarrow but I have a band concert

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@Brianna: I'll be waiting till you return. A band concert? You have a band?????



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I'm back!!!!!!!!! So the band concert was pretty good

The theme was latin music. If went well but We messed up on on song but thats because my musice tearcher changed the ending at the last mintue


And no Maxine, My middle school has a band. I play secound Trumpet. Though I'm one of those peole that don't care bout anything till it is do. I not playing arond! My band teacher thretened to kick me out 22 times(yes I keep count) just so I can prac. my music.

Anyways, Will post on saterday but it will probly be short. Sorry for leaving you like that, with Dan saying"Do you love me as I love you?" but I have to throw in some clift hangers . . . MAWHAHA!!!!!!!!    
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Was searching for qoutes for my wall, when I found this one I had to share it:



Making a million friends is not a Miracle.

The miracle is to make A friend who will stand by you when millions are aganst you . . .   




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This is short 'cus I have to go to my Keybord class . . .


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22 times?! wow... And I love that quote. I have a lot of friends, but only a few who I know will stand by me no matter what. True friends are indeed a blessing and a miracle.


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Just one thing, her name is spelled Natalie.
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Hey . . . .I think my recent post got cut . . .
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Our fates are intertwined but never connected. Love is gone in the midst and we just go on alternative routes.

 

 

 

 


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Whenever we cross paths in that place, you treat me as a ghost. Which that place serves as our comfort. You'll put your troubles down and mine and we'll soar through the skies where we had found LOVE.

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Nicole: I'll give it a try

Everyone: I'm so sorry! I didn't know that my post got cut!


Here is the rest:



Dan's POV: 


All the hope for her to say yes, vanshed when I saw her hisatate. I get go of her shoulder blades and take a step back. "Sorry for wasting your time, Natalie"

I'm already at the end of the hallway, when I hear her cry,"Yes! I do!" I turn around and see her walk quickly twords me. She hugs me, but lets go before I can hug her back. She smiles at me and says, "I realized    




I couldn't being myself to wirte more becuse a quesion was sping around in my head: should I end it with Dan and Natalie happy? or Ian and Natalie have to go back to london in certent matter of time?  I'm so sorry, but I'm going to have to figuer out what do do with these qoutesions. Untill then, you'll have to wait and hope that I choes the one you want 

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