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UGGGHHH I found this on my computer and I'm actually so embarrassed that this exists

 

But why not post this?

 

Don't hate me for this, I was a stupid child (typos will be included)

 

Prologue
 

 

This story takes place in the WAY future.

 

Princess Twilight is now older and Princess Celestia has given the other ponies the gift of being alicorns. Princess Celestia and her sister, Princess Luna, are still the rulers.

 

Each one of the seasonal ponies has a favorite friend. Summer Scorch and Crystal North are PFF’s (pony friends forever). Just like Spring Fever and Autumn Freckle.

 

While their kind and looks are different they still all grow close to each other. Spring Fever and Crystal North are unicorns, and Summer Scorch and Autumn Freckle are pegasi.

 

 

 

Chapter 1
Summer Scorch vs. Autumn Freckle
 

 

“On your marks get set go!” said Summer Scorch as him and Autumn Freckle take lift off.

 

As they race in the sky Summer Scorch suddenly spots Crystal North and Spring Fever beckoning at them. Spring Fever was carrying a pink basket full of flowers and leaves, and Crystal North was carrying a basket of Snowflakes.

 

          “We should probably go down and see what they want.” says Summer Scorch.

 

“Hey guys!” says Crystal North Happily.

 

“What do you want?” says Summer Scorch.

 

“Oh yeah, we know you guys have that big flying session up in cloud stale, and we wanted to ask if you could ask Princess Rainbow Dash to ask Princess Twilight if she could turn us into alicorns so we could be there.” said Spring Fever. 

 

 “Also, we want to fly up and drop these when you guys win.” said Crystal North.

 

“Oh sure, why not.” said Summer Scorch

 

“Thanks a million. See you there!” said Spring Fever.

 

“Totally!” said Crystal North with content.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter2
Spring Fever & Crystal North
 
 

“Hey, do you want to get something for lunch at my café, Winter Sparkle?” Crystal North asked Spring Fever.

 

          “I would love that. Then maybe we can go to my spa, Spring Sensation.” Spring Fever said.

 

          “Sure why not.”

 

          Then, they walked to the café with content. They finally got to the café and got a table.

          “What would you like to eat Ladies? Said Blizzard Storm (she’s like Mrs. Cake).

 

          “We would like the special please.” Said the girls unanimously.

 

          “Good choice. It won’t be long.”

 

“Ooooh! That guy is having corndogs. Corndog, corndog yummy, yummy yum, yum. Said Crystal North.

 

                    Finally their food arrived. They gobbled it up like a pack of hungry wolves. Then they headed to the spa.

          “The usual.” Said Spring Fever.

 

          Their spa treatment got done so they headed home.

 

          “Thanks for an awesome afternoon.” Said Spring Fever.

 

          “No, thank you.” Crystal.

 

          “Bye.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 3
Princess Twilight Sparkle Returns
 

 

 

As Princess Twilight Sparkle sits on her throne she looks outside and thinks, Hmm, I miss getting out and just having fun maybe, I’ll take a trip, and stay at Spring Fever’s for a week. I’ll have to leave a note for my friends.

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          “Buzz, take a letter!” exclaimed Spring Fever, “Dear Princess Twilight Sparkle, I have heard about your visit, and I would like to inform you that you could stay at my place for your visit. We will all be providing your special assistance,   

Your Faithful Student,

Spring Fever.”

 

          Just after Buzz blows the letter, they get a letter from Princess Twilight.

 

Dear Spring Fever,

       I am sorry to inform you that I will have to postpone my visit to next month, but I will need you at the castle immediately.

Yours Truly,

Twilight Sparkle.

 

 

 

Chapter 4
Loki Captures
 

 

As the ponies run into the castle they see Princess Twilight Sparkle pacing, and a worried Spike.

 

“Princess, we came as fast as we could!” said Spring Fever.

 

“Oh,  thank goodness you guys are here!”

 

“Guys,” said Spring Fever looking at Spike and Buzz, “Go eat some gems in Spike’s room while we talk.”

 

“Fine.” said both dragons together.

 

As the dragons left Twilight started talking, “Discord’s son, Loki, is on the loose, and he might capture you guys so you need to stay safe.”

 

When the ponies are walking out Loki captured them. He locked them up in their opposite seasons, Crystal North in Summer, Summer Scorch in Winter, Spring Fever in Autumn, and Autumn Freckle in Spring.

 

 

 

Chapter 5
The Great Escape
 

 

The ponies have all been captured and don’t know what to do because they can’t use their specialties.

 

All they can do now is wait and hope for their survival. In this captivity.

 

Right now Crystal North is in summer.

 

“Ugh!  Its soooooooooo hot! What can I do?”

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Now Spring Fever is in autumn.

 

“Ugh! There’s no flowers here, and kind of cold.  What can I do?”

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Now Autumn Freckle is in spring.

 

“Um, well it’s kind of hot, and there are too many flowers. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! A bee! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. What can I do?

~

Now Summer Scorch is in winter.

 

“Brrrrrrrrrrrrr! Its, its s-o c-c-old. W-what a-am I g-going t-to d-do?”

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Now we are back to Crystal North.  (By the way it’s been like 4 hours)

 

“I got it! I’ll use my mirror to reflect the suns sunlight and melt the bars and then I’ll go back home!”

 

Sure enough it worked. She escaped and she’s heading back home.

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Now we are back to Spring Fever.

 

“I got it! I can use my nail filer as a knife to cut through the bars and escape! It’s a brilliant plan!

 

Sure enough it worked. She escaped and is heading back home.

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Now we are back to Autumn Freckle.

 

``      “I got it! I could call all the animals in spring to chew the bars, so I can escape.”

 

Sure enough, it worked she escaped and she is going back home.

 

Now we are back to Summer Scorch.

 

“I got it! I could get the snowy owls to pick the lock with their claws. Then I could escape.”

 

Sure enough it worked, he escaped, and now he’s going back home.

 

       

 

 

 

 

Chapter 6
Party Time!
 

“Guys! I’m so glad to see you!” they all said unanimously.

 

          “Hey! We should have a party to celebrate Loki being locked up!” Said Crystal

 

          Here is the musical number they sing when they are planning the party.

 

          We’ve just got the day to get ready, and there’s only so much time to lose, cause tonight, ya we’re here to party, so let’s think of something fun to do.

 

We don’t know, we don’t know, what’s gonna happen, we just know, we just know, it’s gonna feel right. All our friends are here, and it’s time to ignite the lights.

 

 Shake your tail cause we’re here to have a party tonight, shake your tail, shake your tail, shake your tail cause we’re here to have a party tonight.  

 

What you didn’t get it right the first time, laugh it off no one said it is crime. Do you thing you know you’re an original. Your ideas are so funny it’s a criminal.

We’ve just got the day to get ready and there’s only so much time to lose cuz tonight ya we’re here to party so let’s think of something fun to do.

 

We don’t know, we don’t know what’s gonna happen we just know, we just know its gonna feel right all our friends are here and it’s time to ignite the lights.

 

Shake your tail cuz we’re here to have a party tonight. Shake your tail, shake your tail. Shake your tail cuz we’re here to have a party tonight.

 

          Suddenly Princess Twilight Sparkle arrives.

 

          “Princess.” Spring Fever says, bowing.

 

          “You have done great work I might even consider making you a permanent alicorn someday.” said Princess Twilight Sparkle.

 

          “Well if nobody’s gonna eat these delicious cupcakes then I’ll just have to eat them.” said Crystal North.

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Best MLP fanfic I've read for a while.

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This brings back so many memories.... It's very MLP-ish, though. And good job on the names! I could never make up good MLP names.

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BRACHA!!!!!

 

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Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another.

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Thanks lol! My best friend and I came up with the names, and she wrote the prologue...I remember thinking this was that greatest piece of literature ever...I look back now and just no...

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Yeah, kids tend to think like that. I hope I don't look back at my writing and think that...

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That’s where editing comes in

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Let's just say my first MLP story was not that great.

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How old were you when you wrote it?

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I don't remember. Maybe 10?

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Yeah, 10 is a weird age when it comes to writing. I’m not sure quite how old I was when I wrote this one...

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It’s not quite as cringey as my first original story. *shudders*

That song sounds like something from MLP!

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I have never been sarcastic or snarky in my LIFE.

 

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