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Hi everyone, this is just a place for others to post their poems and songs and recieve feedback and reviews. This is a great way to share poems or songs. Please post some of original work.

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

Wow, this sounds like a great idea. I might post a song I was writing called "Bad Pork (in tune of "Bad Blood")". Also do you mind if I call you Pinky?

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

I will be here a lot...

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Bracha

 

Life's tough. I try to be tougher.

 

Broken legs but I chase perfection

These walls are my blank expression

My mind is a home I'm trapped in

And it's lonely inside this mansion

                                                         

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

You can call me pinky (even though most call me pink or my actual name). The most recent I wrote was My Life is a Game which I posted in another thread.

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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ablesong24

Branch: Janus

I will be here a lot lol. I write lyrics in my spare time. 

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                KEY

   

 

           HOPELESS WANDERER

      [QUEEN OF BROKEN DREAMS]

 

Not today! Said I to the shadows. I will have my fair day in darkness but not today!

 

                 DidymusTwins

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Branch: Tomas

Bookmark

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- Lahash -

Formerly Samurai

Est. January 2014

 

It's a truth that in love and war

Worlds collide and hearts get broken

I want to live like I know I'm dying

Take up my cross, not be afraid

 

I won't be coming back.

 

Love you all. Stay positive. <3

 

 

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

Ok, heres a song that I wrote (right in the middle of school). It's called "Story of my Life", its not finish yet so its very short.

 

This is the story of my life,

do-do-do-do

the story of my life,

do-do-do-do

Don't ask me to write it all down for you.

I rather sing all to you

do-do-do....do

I was born in a loving home,

(do-do-do)

I was born to loving parents,

(do-do-do)

I was born in a crazy world.

(do-do-do)

 

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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twilightsparkly139

Branch: Janus

I would need time to write one.

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ablesong24

Branch: Janus

@Catpizza: what genre are you going for? If you're going for like a Blues kinda genre I think it's really good but I think it should be four do's all the way through so it sounds smoother but good work! ^-^ 

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                KEY

   

 

           HOPELESS WANDERER

      [QUEEN OF BROKEN DREAMS]

 

Not today! Said I to the shadows. I will have my fair day in darkness but not today!

 

                 DidymusTwins

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

@Ablesong I'm not sure its not a Blues genre, its more like a Pop genre. And thank you for the advice, I just tested the song out with 4 do's and it didn't quite work out with the song. The fourth do was off-key than the other keys but thanks for the advice. :*)

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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ablesong24

Branch: Janus

@Catpizza: Yeah, that's the problem with only seeing the lyrics instead of hearing them. The way I'm picturing it sounds like a Blues song so four do's might work better like most blues song have a four beat tempo. Do you have a song I can base the sound off of? Just so I can somewhat hear what you're going for. 

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                KEY

   

 

           HOPELESS WANDERER

      [QUEEN OF BROKEN DREAMS]

 

Not today! Said I to the shadows. I will have my fair day in darkness but not today!

 

                 DidymusTwins

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ablesong24

Branch: Janus

So I haven't written lyrics in about 6 months and I know more about music now. This is my most recent. I'm kinda cringing at it now. =-= 

 

 

                Love At First Sight                 

 

 

ba da ba da ba da da

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Wooo oh oh (hey) 

 

I was walking on the street with my head down low (woo oh oh) 

Feelin the pressure of the world on my shoulders (hey hey) 

My money my money was running low low low (mm mm) 

My heart was heavy

My soul had no fire

My dreams were broken

Had no hope for love 

 

I saw your face my heart skipped a beat 

Your eyes glanced at me 

I felt a spark 

Had nothing to lose 

I took the risk 

 

Walked up walked up 

Heart beating fast fast now 

You gave a warm smile and said yes 

 

CHORUS

 

You caught my attention 

You took my hand and my heart (woo hey hey) 

You became my fire ( fire) 

Made me feel alive and mighty fine 

Whenever I'm with you

That's when i knew it was love at first sight

Love at first sight 

 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Wooo hey hey 

 

 

It feels so right with you by my side 

My dreams are of many now 

My soul is blazing

My heart is lite 

 

Got my head up high

feelin like touching the clouds (clouds) 

The pressure is gone 

My money may be low but i got you by my side

 

Yeah love shook us 

Love at First sight (hey)

Saw it in your eyes (hey) 

Livin on cloud nine (hey) 

And now you 

 

CHORUS

 

you caught my attention 

You took my hand and my heart (woo hey hey) 

You became my fire (fire) 

Made me feel alive and mighty fine 

Whenever I'm with you you you

That's when i knew it was love at first sight

Love at first sight 

 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Woo hey hey 

That's what they call love at first sight 

 

 

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                KEY

   

 

           HOPELESS WANDERER

      [QUEEN OF BROKEN DREAMS]

 

Not today! Said I to the shadows. I will have my fair day in darkness but not today!

 

                 DidymusTwins

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

@Ablesong No, I don't have a song to base the sound off of. It was a beat that I made up. Also I liked your song, was it supposed to be a 1940's style of music?

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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Branch: Janus

@Catpizza: No, but you know that's a great idea! I think I like it more as a 1940s style. XD 

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                KEY

   

 

           HOPELESS WANDERER

      [QUEEN OF BROKEN DREAMS]

 

Not today! Said I to the shadows. I will have my fair day in darkness but not today!

 

                 DidymusTwins

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Whoa Key that's good! 

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Bracha

 

Life's tough. I try to be tougher.

 

Broken legs but I chase perfection

These walls are my blank expression

My mind is a home I'm trapped in

And it's lonely inside this mansion

                                                         

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

One of my songs that I've been working on lately:

 

Emotions

 

I've been feeling all these things lately

I've been seeing them all around me

oh oooo ooo

oh oo oo

Crying in the bed

feeling upset that 

your heart grows small

oh oooo oooo

oh oooo oooo

Emotions, Emotions

E-M-O-TI-O-N-S, yea

Emotions emotions

I've feeling them lately

oh oooo 

emmotions, emmotions

Ahhh Ahh Ahh

 

I've been walking in the street

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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twilightsparkly139

Branch: Janus

Woah. Emotions is pretty good. I have finally gotten one, but its on my computer. This is my phone.

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

Im still working on the song, but im trying to find like a good tune to it more like Pop music but I don't want it to sound like other songs.

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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proudcat90

Branch: Ekaterina

Nice! I finally worked up the courage to post this poem...

 

Whitewashed world

Muddy boots

Muddy, muddy

Like my mind

Who am I?

Birdie, fly

Birdie's wings

Are blody

Whitewashed world

Muddy boots

Blody wings

Like my mind

Who am I?

Painful girl

Is hiding

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BRACHA!!!!!

 

SliGhtLy BonKerS

 

(JusT IgnOre Me)

 

Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another.

                                                                                               -Lemony Snicket

  

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Nice! I finally got the courage to post something... I hope it’s not horrible. It’s a poem.

 

Whitewashed world

Muddy boots 

Muddy, muddy

Like my mind 

Who am I?

Birdie, fly

Birdie’s wings

Are bloody

Like my mind

Who am I?

Whitewashed world

Muddy boots

Bloody wings

Like my mind

Who am I? 

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Bracha

 

Life's tough. I try to be tougher.

 

Broken legs but I chase perfection

These walls are my blank expression

My mind is a home I'm trapped in

And it's lonely inside this mansion

                                                         

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twilightsparkly139

Branch: Janus

Gag! I posted mine on my computer, but it didn't come through!

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

The poem is pretty good it kind of reminds me of the little kids story books.

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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cloudart142

Branch: Lucian

This is a poem (I think?). I don’t know, I just needed to share it with some people now. I hope you guys like! I’m not entirely sure if it has ended yet but we’ll see.

 

Why do I keep falling for it,

All those empty promises,

every single time you say “I will”?

 

Tears are coming down my face,

you aren’t even sorry for your mistake.

why do I keep disappointmenting myself 

over and over again? 

 

My hope in you is shriveling up:

its been once

its been twice

now it’s a third

I thought you would learn 

 

But you keep doing it every time 

I can’t keep up being kind

I wish could lie

Don’t you hear me sigh? 

 

And I wish I could say goodbye

you’ve hurt me more than you know 

and I even wish sometimes

that I could fly solo

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Helloooooooooooo!

I’m a

Dreamer

Book- lover

Soccer Player

Artist 

And Music Listener 

Nice to Meet You,

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proudcat90

Branch: Ekaterina

Wow, it's really good! You should add some more.

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BRACHA!!!!!

 

SliGhtLy BonKerS

 

(JusT IgnOre Me)

 

Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another.

                                                                                               -Lemony Snicket

  

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amberdolphin1210

Branch: Lucian

Gah! Why won't mine go through?!

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Amber.

 

Miraculer

Whovian!

I'm from the 39 clues website!

Forum Twins: Fiona and Jaiden

I'm A Jehovah's Witness.

Check out my RPs! the 39 clues, Vespers RP. Children of Bigfoot RP, Limited Spots

leave a message at the beep, unless it's bad news BEEP

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

I'm still working on my other song but here's a song that I wrote for a boss battle of one my games.

 

This is the last level of the game.

Where you get to fight two bosses instead of one.

First you gotta fight Silver Sonic,

then you gotta fight Dr. Eggman,

its really hard cause you have no rings to help you.

 

 

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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amberdolphin1210

Branch: Lucian

Silver Sonic? Isn't that guy just called Silver, or is Silver Sonic an entirely different character?

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Amber.

 

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Whovian!

I'm from the 39 clues website!

Forum Twins: Fiona and Jaiden

I'm A Jehovah's Witness.

Check out my RPs! the 39 clues, Vespers RP. Children of Bigfoot RP, Limited Spots

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catpizza879

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@Amber Yeah Silver Sonic is a robot built by you-know-who to defeat Sonic

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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amberdolphin1210

Branch: Lucian

Oh. Egghead. Of course. He always loses, doesn't he? I haven't seen much Sonic except for Sonic Boom.

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Miraculer

Whovian!

I'm from the 39 clues website!

Forum Twins: Fiona and Jaiden

I'm A Jehovah's Witness.

Check out my RPs! the 39 clues, Vespers RP. Children of Bigfoot RP, Limited Spots

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

Lets play a game.

I will write a line and then each person has to add another line and then create a poem or song.

 

 

First line-

 

Things are not always fair

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

But I will try

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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cloudart142

Branch: Lucian

obstacles block my path

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I’m a

Dreamer

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Soccer Player

Artist 

And Music Listener 

Nice to Meet You,

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pinkcreative39

Branch: Janus

but i will get through

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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crimsoncat926

Branch: Ekaterina

Once upon a time, there was a child and a pen

 

They wrote of the stories that the world whispered,

 

Together they recorded the songs of the breeze, 

 

Together they told the stories of the sea, 

 

Together they wrote the stories that the world whispered, 

 

A child and a pen, a pen and a child

 

Together, they shall have no end

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Come, and gather, you children of the Words... 

 

You know of the songs the wind sing

 

You know of the words the earth breathe

 

You know of the stories that the fire tells

 

Come, the Words call you...

 

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Pretty good, I like it.

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Bracha

 

Life's tough. I try to be tougher.

 

Broken legs but I chase perfection

These walls are my blank expression

My mind is a home I'm trapped in

And it's lonely inside this mansion

                                                         

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Anybody still here?

 

I must've climbed too high

Cuz it's getting hard to breathe

And I wish I'd never come up

But when you're flying, you can't see

 

I must've been here too long

Cuz the air is getting thin

My vision's fading out now

And the world's starting to spin

 

I must not belong here

Cuz it's too pure for me to take

So I'm crashing down the cliffside

To my bloody, bloody lake.

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Life's tough. I try to be tougher.

 

Broken legs but I chase perfection

These walls are my blank expression

My mind is a home I'm trapped in

And it's lonely inside this mansion

                                                         

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twilightsparkly139

Branch: Janus

Not bad, Bracha.

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Thats pretty good.

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 Call me ...Naina 

 

Believe in yourself

dream in your sleep

dream in your life 

make those dreams come true

dont give up on your dreams 

no matter what

 

I am also Browniedress108 but i lost my password.

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catpizza879

Branch: Ekaterina

Woah Bracha that was a little to much, but I like it. Here's, yet another song that I'm working on.

 

Bad Pork (in tune of Bad Blood)

 

Now we have Bad Pork,

and it use to good pork,

so take a look at what you done,

and baby now we have Bad Pork.

Hey!

Did you think that was fine?

Spoiling all my perfectly good pork.

 

Ok...Don't judge me I'm just weird.

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 Call me Rashid of the turbulent wind

  I LOVE books and more books

   I LOVE cats

    I'm a Christian 

     A SUPER nerd

      "I don't believe in doing things the smart way, I believe in doing things the fast way." ~ My Dad

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proudcat90

Branch: Ekaterina

Weird is good! I like that, it's funny. What did you mean my too much?

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BRACHA!!!!!

 

SliGhtLy BonKerS

 

(JusT IgnOre Me)

 

Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another.

                                                                                               -Lemony Snicket

  

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