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They tortured Rose's only... Excuse me.

*teleports to a forest and karate chops the trees out of anger*

 

Yeah, she wants someone to save rose or something. I'll go calm her down.

 

*Teleports back*

Cat Noir! Can you give me a Miraculous?

 

Sorry. Only Ladybug give Miraculouses.

 

Fine! Excuse me.

*teleports again to do what Amber did earlier.*

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Lucy- !!!

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He walked into the locker room, eager to change out of his sweaty training clothes. He saw Daren, a good for nothing brute, standing over Rose with a stun gun in hand. This girl, who messed with his head, made him want to live, never give up. He'd seen the way she smashed Ezmeralda into the doorpost. And Daren dared hurt her. His rage could not be contained. In seconds, he was on Daren, fists flying. 

 "All right, all right, man. I was just playing around. You can have your sweetheart." Typical Daren, giving in as soon as things got tough. He spit straight in the guy's face. 

 Walking down the hall with Rose in his arms, he couldn't understand the feelings inside. And he didn't like them. It made him vulnerable. So he pushed them away. 

"She's my mission, that's all. I rescued her because she's my mission." He looked down at her, and couldn't help but think that she was quite a lovely mission. They reached the bedroom, and carefully tucked her in, wishing he'd had a mother to do this for him once upon a time, wondering if she felt the same way.

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Great chapter. TIP: switching ways of storytelling (first-person POV to third-person POV) isn't ever the best writing tactic. If you want to include this guy's perspective, that's 100% okay, but I suggest making it all first person, and his perspective just being a new chapter.

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YAY! Wait, Oh, My, Celestia! He's got a crush!

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Lucy- That's what I wanted to do but E didn't feel comfortable writing from a Logan's point of view.

Amber- Rose won this because of you! Thanks!

 

 I wake up and roll over groggily. I'm in my bedroom, which is nice. But I don't remember going to sleep here... Oh yeah! That creep with a stun gun shot me down. I don't know who brought me here, but it sure was nice of them. Wouldn't want to wake up with boys... I'm not even going to finish that thought.

 Stepping out of bed, I realize that I have no idea where I'm going. I'm about to go back into bed and think of a plan when the bathroom door cracks open. And guess who steps out?

 In seconds, I'm on him. Caught by surprize, he steps backward and I take the opportunity to slam my elbow into his stomach. He sucks in a breath and is about to punch me when I stomp on his toes, hard. He still manages to punch my shoulder, but I ignore the pain and focus on his nose. Wham!, and it's got blood leaking out. If I get the next step right, he'll be down for sure. But instead he twists his leg around both of mine and I trip. Quickly, I jump back up, and before he knows what's happening, my knee connects. 

 My kidnapper doubles over in pain, and I almost feel bad. But not quite. He limps over to his bed and flops down on it. 

 "Dude! I save you from being eaten by sharks, make sure you don't wake up on a floor covered in who knows what, and this is how you repay me?" He can't be serious.

 "You forgot about the part where you kidnapped me! I wouldn't be in any of those situations if-" 

 "Look, I would've been killed painfully if I didn't do that. I'd gladly give up my life now that I know you." I snort. "But I'm your trainer and roommate from now on, so we have to learn to get along!"

 Wait, what? Things just got a whole lot more complicating.

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Ooh, things just got interesting

 

Ah, I see. Maybe try and convince her. Believe me, flip-flopping back and forth between 1st and 3rd person won’t end up working in the end.

 

Nonetheless, I still love it!

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Sweet Celestia! She did it! Whoo hoooooo!

*runs through the country side yelling*

 

 

She's gonna be a while. She says great job.

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The next part isn't going thrugh, I'll revise it again and post later.

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What happens next. Keep doing the story. My thing is Animal RP and I would like you to give it a star.

 

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What? It's not going through? Just like my second part to my Fanfiction.

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Sorry. I tried again this morning, it's not going through.

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 I'd assumed that they realized I have no information, they'd get rid of me. But I have a fate far worse. Agent. I have to be an agent for this horrible organization. They made me sit through a boring orientation, but I couldn't concentrate. What's my mother doing here, and isn't she a traitor or something? Where's Charlie and what are they doing to him? How can I save Suzy and all those innocent prisoners? Why is my kidnapper being nice to me?

 

Sorry it's so short, I don't know if a longer post will go through.

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At least we got a new part. Right guys?

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The next part isn't going through because it thinks the story is true and someone is trying to tell me to kilt ppl. I need code words.

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Hmmm... you could use synonyms.

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Nothing's going through, so I will wait a few days and hope something changes because I modified it and it didn't go through even though there was nothing questionable.

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Same here

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Hmm... also, why are you guys being so emotional!? I go through this every day of my life! Okay, not really, but you get it.

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I guess I have a good life. And... I'm dissapointed I still haven't seen Style Queen or Queen Wasp. Come on, Zagtoon! I've been waiting for ages!

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E has officially joined the MB! Her username is infiltratingpands12.

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Hey everyone guess who?

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People say you can't live without love... I think oxygen's more important.

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aaahhhhh! I finally got it to work!Yay!

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People say you can't live without love... I think oxygen's more important.

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Hi E! I love your siggy! I should tell my family that. They'll get a whoop out of it! 

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What's up, E? I'm Raven.

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E!!! Ohmigosh it works! THANK THE HEAVENS!!! Are you online?

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You gonna continue this?

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I try posting every day, it never goes through. Yesterday I just did a summary, but it still didn't work. 

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I'll take Lucy's idea and do a summary. If this doesn't go through, nothing will.

 

 Rose has to sit through an "orientation". She can't concentrate because of all her unanswered questions and worry about Charlie. She does hear enough to understand that it's an organization called RWD that's trying to rule the world. They will eliminate the most important people country by country. Afterwards, Rose is taken to a training room. She learns that her kid napper is going to be her trainer and roommate. They will always be together since she is his assigned "student". He tells her that his name is Logan and mentions that he is the best Recruit and none of the Elites come close, but does not explain what this means. It's just one more bit of confusion in Rose's life.

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Much better! At least it's kinda the story.

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I'm sorry I missed this, it's great!

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I'a Hufflepuff

 

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All right now, let's see if this goes through before November...

 

 It's the end of yet another training session, and I am exhausted. I remember that time Eve promised me a bed. The temptation was so great, I didn't think twice about being an agent. But here I amit's been almost a month, and I'm sick. Logan's still trying to get me to forgive him, but I don't see how I can. Sure, I'm sorry he's had as messed up a life as I do, but couldn't he have left me alone instead of making it worse? I'm sure he could've run away. I guess I'm being selfish, but can you blame me?

 Logan breaks my chain of thought with a sad look on his face.

 "We just got your first mission."

 I'd think he's be excited for this. "Okay, so what do we have to do?" 

 Logan sighs. "I'll explain in the room."

 He looks so lost, I feel sorry for him. Right now, he seems so human. 

 "Logan? What is it?" He shrugs.

 "Nothing. I'm fine. Just another day turning innocent girls into kilters. No biggie."

 A wave of guilt hits me like a tsunami. How could I have been so self centered? Why didn't I see it like this? His past has been just as horrible as mine, possibly worse, for all I know. Once upon a time, he was kid napped just like me. And I've been so inconsiderate. 

 Did I actually think he's been wanting to hurt me? All he did was follow orders, try to live one more day. Nobody wants to end up like Suzy. When he's done telling me about this mission, I'll ask for some help. We'll come up with a plan together.

 Now, don't think I'm ready to be buddies just like that. We'll see his true colors once he agrees. 

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Thanks guys.

 

 I listen with half and ear as Logan explains the mission: We've got to sneak into some bigwig party and kilt the host, then get out before anyone knows what happened. I really don't want to do this.

 "Listen, we need a plan. You can't just go around kilting people because someone tells you to. Have you ever thought of bringing this place down?"

 Logan snorts. "Thought of it? I dream of it. But only an idiot would try something like that. Don't give yourself false hope. It only makes it hurt more." He laughs, but it doesn't sound happy. The words don't discourage me, and the wheels in my head keep turning. 

 "Wait a minute. You said the only way that any mission can work is if we have full cooperation and trust, right?" Logan nods, mutters something about irony. "So if we turn others against the leaders..." 

 Logan's eyes open wide. "Are you crazy? The missions won't work. You know what happens to people who fail their missions?"

 I shake my head.

 "Neither do I. But they never fail a mission again, I can tell you that." He's getting really worked up, and I'm about to tell him to relax. But I close my mouth as soon as I open it.

 "What?" Logan asks. 

 "You- you're eyes just turned yellow.

 Logan swears. "Get away form me, fast."

 "Excuse me?" 

 "Look, I don't want to hurt you, but if you don't move, I will!" 

 My eyes sting, I'm confused, I thought he wasn't bad at heart. "Logan, what's going on? You're not making any sense!" He licks his lips, and his tongue looks reptilian. I see the faint outline of scales on his forehead. 

 This just got really weird.

 I back up, and suddenly, he lunges at me, trying to bite a chunk of my arm off. I jump to the side and fall into the closet. He flicks his tongue out, backs up a step. It looks like it hurts. With no warning, he lunges forward again, but I'm faster. While he struggles to fight whatever's controlling him, I grab a hanger and twist it open. As soon as he's on me, I wrap it around his throat. We breathe heavily, staring each other down. Slowly, he becomes human again. 

 I take the hanger off his neck, and my finger brushes his cheek. We're alone in a closet and way too close. I quickly scramble out, and Logan follows. 

 "So..." I begin. "What was that?" Logan's sitting next to me on his bed, shaking. It looks like he's trying not to cry. 

 "They do, they do DNA mutation. To see if- if they can build an army of-" He stops and takes in a shaky breath. I've heard enough, and if he opens his mouth again he's just going to cry.

 "I get it. That okay. Just go to sleep now."

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Woah! talk about cray cray!

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Yes, that definitely is totally cray-cray.

 

 This morning, I am getting down to business. I have a lot of things I need to know and do: According to Eve, my parents are traitors, so why is my mother here? What is Suzy being used for? Maybe DNA mutations, like with Logan? Is that what they're doing to Charlie?

 It still hurts to think about him. 

 What did Logan mean by Recruit and Elite? How can I take down RWD?

 I ask Logan and he says that he has no idea what my mother's doing here, he doesn't know why Suzy's here but my theory has some sense, and why can't we just do what the boss tells us and live peacefully? (Which results in me giving him a speech about right and wrong and you can't hurt people for your benefit.) 

 But he does have answers to one thing.

 "The Recruits are kids like me and you. We're taken into the organization because we have potential. We're strong. Elites are kids born here. Their parents were matched up to get the strongest, smartest kids."  

 I bit my lip. "That's horrible." 

 Logan smiles bitterly. "Another thing you're planning to get rid of?" Yeah. 

 Why doesn't he believe?Won't he even try? But now we're at the training center and I can't talk.

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Hello, my adoring fans. Here is the next part. Judging from your impatient comments, you are going out of your minds to read this.

 

 The days go on like this, and I'm too exhausted to thing up a good, solid plan. But tomorrow night's the party and I need to think of something, fast. I'll take advantage of lunchtime.

 

 

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Not bad. Just waiting for more very patiently!

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Branch: Lucian

Chapter 7

 

 This girl... She's made me feel something I haven't ever felt before. But I just don't understand how she has hope, how she believes that there's a way through this. And now... my life's just a whole lot more complicated. I can't ignore the way my heart races when she looks at me, the shock I get when we touch during training.

 But... I hate that I care about her. For some reason, I feel responsible to get her out here, or at least pretend to have hope. I don't want to encourage her, though, because it's just gonna hurt more when they crush her. Why does life have to be so hard? Can't it just go easy on me for once?

 After everything that's happened, you'd think I get a break. That never happens. This feeling of utter hopelessness, this is what makes me want to leave it all behind. Even if the only other option is oblivion, I'll take it. [This part won't go through. He just says how he doesn't believe in a higher power because he sure ain't getting salvation!] But Rose... she makes me feel good, for the most part, and here she comes.

 My beacon of light.

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Bracha

 

Home is behind, the world ahead, and there are many paths to tread.

Through shadows to the edge of night, until the stars are all alight.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                         

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Branch: Ekaterina

So glad to see you took my advice on making it a first person POV! Just another tip: when you switch perspectives, try to put the character’s name at the beginning of the chapter. Just so the readers don’t get confused :)

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