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So, how would Catalina respond to the following line:

 

“If you watched someone die, because of your mistake, how would you feel?”

 

(I also changed her line to: “In all honesty, sire, you are not well.” Sound better?)

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Can I think on it?

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Yep! No rush :3 I'll write around it, work on editing, etc.

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Something along the lines of:

 

"How would I feel? Or how would I react? Because I do hope those are two very different things."

 

If- "How You Feel."

"Hate. Lots of hate. I'd want to spend all my days tracking down whoever did it and taking revenge."

 

If- "How You Would React"

"Very different from how I feel. I cannot do everything I wish to do; and what I would wish to do would not be healthy. I would be forced to move on."

 

 

Of course, you can word anything however.

 

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Alright!

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0_0

 

THAT IS PERFECT. THANK YOU!!!

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How's this sound:

 

(I really want to do Catalina justice)

 


"How would I feel? Or how would I react? Because I do hope those are two very different things."


“They are. Let us say both. How would you feel?”


She pondered for a moment. “Hate. Lots of hate. I'd want to spend all my days tracking down whoever did it and taking revenge."


“And how would you react?”


"Very different from how I feel. I cannot do everything I wish to do; and what I would wish to do would not be healthy. I would be forced to move on."

 

 

 

Working on Damien's response now.

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Perfect! :3

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umm...

 

awkward question.

 

How would she respond to this line:

 

“Catalina, I have heard you carry a flame for me.”

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AWKWARD.

 

Probably something super intelligent like, "Hmm?"

 

Nah, just kidding.

 

Fake outrage that a Prince would dare turn a ear to "rumors".

 

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OOOHHHH THAT'S AMAZING.

 

 

I forgot to ask about personality when I had people make characters :P

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Let me write one up, then. :)

 

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I'll make this quick.

 

“Apologies, milady. I meant you no disrespect. If you did have such feelings, I would have asked you to be a suitress.”

 

Response?

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Is this Catalina-ish? It'll be the last line she has this chapter :)

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