Alright, Zeke, couple of notes.
-Not every POV is going to be my best POV. Especially not at the point I'm at in my life right now. I have a lot on my plate, that I'm dealing with all by myself. I'm glad to be here and all that, but this is not a priority for me. Sorry you didn't like my writing in that POV, but there ain't nothing I can do about it. Not every POV I've seen from you is the best, but do I comment on it every time I see something I don't like?
-I understand that your character is like, this big character in the plot line, but mine's really not. He's hardly mentioned in any of the POVs and that's not easy to go off of. Also, I've just returned and I really don't know how the SBG works. Reading through POVs doesn't cut it for me. I don't really have the ability to just *poof* insert Brad into a plotline he wasn't really included in. It will take time.
-The whole "oh no a major thing in the plotline is missing *gasp*" is cliche in general. It was cliche when y'all did it with the book. It's cliche, my dude. Not always a bad thing.
-I will attempt to rewrite it, but at the moment I have neither the time nor the will to do it again until Tuesday.
I understand you didn't mean to be rude, but your criticism was not asked for. However, I will take it and attempt to work with it, if you will give me until Tuesday. If not, then there's nothing I can do about it.