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Technically, I can rewrite it if you like. But it wouldn't be ready until Wednesday or Thursday of next week, I'm so busy.

 

Also, no offense, but not every POV is going to be my best. And if you don't like something I write, at least make sure you criticism is constructive, rather than tearing me down like that. 

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I'm not mad or anything, but being pushed like that will not make we want to continue this.

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Sorry, that day was just a bad day for me overall. I failed one of my tests and I was in a really bad mood.  It's my bad Clev, won't happen again. You don't need to re-write. 

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Alright, Zeke, couple of notes.

-Not every POV is going to be my best POV. Especially not at the point I'm at in my life right now. I have a lot on my plate, that I'm dealing with all by myself. I'm glad to be here and all that, but this is not a priority for me. Sorry you didn't like my writing in that POV, but there ain't nothing I can do about it. Not every POV I've seen from you is the best, but do I comment on it every time I see something I don't like?

-I understand that your character is like, this big character in the plot line, but mine's really not. He's hardly mentioned in any of the POVs and that's not easy to go off of. Also, I've just returned and I really don't know how the SBG works. Reading through POVs doesn't cut it for me. I don't really have the ability to just *poof* insert Brad into a plotline he wasn't really included in. It will take time.

-The whole "oh no a major thing in the plotline is missing *gasp*" is cliche in general. It was cliche when y'all did it with the book. It's cliche, my dude. Not always a bad thing.

-I will attempt to rewrite it, but at the moment I have neither the time nor the will to do it again until Tuesday.

 

I understand you didn't mean to be rude, but your criticism was not asked for. However, I will take it and attempt to work with it, if you will give me until Tuesday. If not, then there's nothing I can do about it.

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Sorry, Zeke, I wrote that yesterday and I didn't want it to go through.

 

I understand, you didn't do anything wrong. :)

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I think we should take a break.

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The whole filter time thing ruined everything. I never wanted all this.

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Ouch... 

Maybe we should just end this Brad and Chad thing? 

 

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Let me explain please, (I'm sorry Clev) I never wanted this to be a problem. I thought it was going to be Chad and Brad writing about their perspectives of what is going on from the outside looking in, with a side plot at the same time. I guess I took outside looking in the wrong way.  I thought we'd be going with the plot when we decided to jump back in time. I'm just caught up in my own head I guess. 

 

Sorry

 

 

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No, man, that's something a dramatic fifteen year old girl wrote when she was annoyed. I've cooled down.

I'm sorry, I usually tend to take these slow with RPs. That was only my second POV. The filter is messing up a lot, and I'm game to do this, but i understand if you don't want to work with me anymore.

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I'm not mad at you. I still want to do this. I don't do well under pressure though.

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Guys this RP is the main reason I stayed these last two years. Mickey thank you so much for this. It was so fun to write. 

Tobias and Clev, you guys are amazing. Keep writing and hopefully, I will see you guys on Home Base. Idk If it will work on my computer. I'll have to wait and see. This was just an awesome RP. I had a lot of fun. I will forever remember the name Sigmund lol. (I found it by using a random name generator.) 

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Hey, man, you were amazing to work with. Keep doing what you love.

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Are you going to be on home base Clev?

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