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I won't be able to post it tonight. Personal reasons. 

Sorry about the wait.

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The chapter should be going through right now. 

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Cape Colony, October 14, 1899

Amanda took a gaze at the sunset from her bay window. Her father and her had rarely talked to her the last couple of days.  The food that Kaywo had prepared was excellent as usual. Amanda wanted to sink in here. Sure, It was different from the big city of london,but Amanda felt more free here. She kept it hidden knowing that she would have to leave, which brought a great non-appealing feeling in the stomach. Amanda slowly turned her head back to the table only to see her father staring right at her. She swiftly turned her head back towards the food.

A loud knock came from the main doorway. Tika then came into our room with Jack right beside her.

“ You have a visitor.” she said to Frederic, bowed and left. Tika always acted so composed around Amanda’s father which somewhat bothered Amanda.  Jack then spoke voice quivering, “Um, Hello sir, I was um… wondering if a… Amanda wanted to go to the.. Um Pier?”

Frederic looked at Jack then turned to Amanda.

“This is one of your friends?”

“Yes Father, his name is Jack.”

“Well Jack, I see you met my Peacherino.” He said making Amanda blush. Jack then realized the question stuttered to speak, “W-well yes sir, I met her in the market. Look I’m sorry I showed up, I should have known it was supper time. I can just go.”

Frederic then in an appealing voice pleaded, “No-No, I do want to hear about you lad. Amanda never really tells me about her life outside of the estate. Pull up a chair lad.”

Jack awkwardly pulled out the cushioned engraved chair from under the table and sat down. Amanda was blushing from embarrassment which she desperately was trying to hide.

“So Jack, What made you come here?”

Jack scooted in his chair a little before replying in an orotund voice, “Well you see sir, my father used to ‘carry the banner’{1} well, until he got a job as a politician. Eventually he went over here where he met my mother. He passed away from disease though when I was 6…” then his voice faded away. Frederic quickly tried to change subject,

“I expect you must have registered for the army? I have been quite busy arranging for battle. I leave on the 27th with General Bryant. I just hope Amanda is safe for the couple of days without me before she leaves.”

“Amanda you're leaving?” said Jack in a almost hurt voice. Then Frederic conveyed,

“Amanda, You didn’t tell him?”

 Amanda almost pouted out, “Jack, I was going to tell you, I just didn’t know how.”

Jack sighed, “It’s ok. I don’t really deserve to be into your guy’s business anyway. I’m going on the 23rd, I’m enlisted for Border regiment. They are arriving at Cape Town. I’m joining in. Hopefully all will turn out well”

Frederic nodded taking another precise bite of the tenderloin , “Ah, I see. So have you received your trai-”

Just then a knock on the door interrupted Frederick’s question. The door creaked open and running feet could be heard down the hall. Just then a boy entered the room.

“Colonel Pearson, I have a message from Lt.Smith.”

The boy looked around 14, he was short with deep brown eyes, brown-red locks of hair down to his collar. He was wearing loose disheveled clothes and had charcoal stains over his skin as well. Then he held out a letter with his charcoal hand marks stained over it. The boy looked at Amanda and winked. Amanda felt a queasy feeling about the boy and turned away looking at the window. Frederic opened the letter cautiously reading the letter. Then his eyes expanded and he gasped.

“I have to go.” he said.


{1}=vagrant  

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I'm going to plan to post at least once a week on this story since summer is coming soon if that's ok with you guys?

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Just an asexual boi

 

I actually write and roleplay quite a lot.

 

 

 

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Is the author around, this is good.

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THE PHANTOM OF THE MB

FELIX

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I FELL ASLEEP FOR ONE MONTH.....AGAIN.

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HI MY NAMES ***  ZEKROM RESHIRAM

 

PS I live  in the philippines

 ALSO,MUCH LAG.

 

 

 

 

ALL ABOARD THE HYPE TRAIN!

 

 

 

#beliveinthepeeko

 

 

 

I HATE MY LIFE :(

 

 

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Orange Free State, October 16, 1899

Benjamin walked over the terrain with his newly formed unit.

“Hulle kon enige plek wees!” said Kristoff, the elected leader of their unit. No one really followed his command, they were all just farmers anyway. The Germans wanted the Boers to beat the British due to the jealousy of the British influence in the world. No encounter had come to Benj and his Father’s group, in fact Benj had made a new friend Aafke. He was wearing his regular farmer clothes and like Benj, a bandoleer of ammunition slung across his chest.  Aafke didn’t talk much, but he could help Benj get by in conversations. The unit (200 men) all started to talk. Benj barely noticed that everyone had stopped.

“Grawe!” Kristoff yelled in his guttural voice . The oxen carrying our materials with us came to a halt has other men started to hand out spades. A big man with sweat coming down his cheeks squinted at Benjamin, hands full of spades,  then shoved the spade into his chest. Benjamin looked around to see other men start to dig.

We’re making a trench Benj thought to himself. Aafke walked up to him, and lifted his head motioning to the other guy that had handed the shovels,

“Hy is 'n ruk , ignoreer hom.”

Benjamin gritted his teeth. He nodded and looked at the sun at high noon.  Benj knew what was to happen. Next time he would move from the trench that was to be made , would be after he would finally fire a shot at the British.

 

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Nice

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THE PHANTOM OF THE MB

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Awesome

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I need the next chapter!!!!

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This is great! Post more soon!

 

          ~Krista~

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        Krista the Key

 

 

    Will you give all you can give

        So that our banner may advance?

             Some will fall and some will live

                 Will you stand up and take your chance?

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Thanks guys, summer is here so I can post again! 

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This is SO COOL!!!! :D I've only read the first chapter, I love the idea! It's amazing! Keep writing!

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mickey. 

 

no more band-aids on my heartaches.

no more smoke when i burn my pancakes. 

no more drowning in my sorrow. 

with my chin held up there's always better luck

tomorrow. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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More!!!!!!!!

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Would you help? Should i changed the war. It stinks how no one knows about the second boer war. Tis a shame.

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Actually that's a good thing people are learning something and its cool being in this type of setting!

 

And I can help just ask me I do writing tips to!

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Can you create a planning post? So people don't see the plot spoilers right on my story post.

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Anybody still here, I'm thinking of starting it up again?

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IM HERE!!!!!!!!!!

 

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Ok then, Prepare for more soon!

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Yeah! Now I have to go reread the last part of the story!!!!

 

 

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Cape Colony October 16th 1899

Amanda was distraught. War was here and it showed in the town. When she went out to the market earlier in the afternoon with Tika, there were less salespeople that she had ever seen and she saw Fathers hugging their loved ones while men in uniforms carried their bags. Battles that the Boers had seized had begun.  Jack was gone, he had left early morning to train for defending the front lines All that was left was her and the servants. Frederick was in a world and mind of his own and the rest of the town was in a state of hysteria. Now it was nearing supper, and Amanda decided it would be best if she just stayed in her room. She wasn’t in any mood to help cook, let alone eat. It felt as though the world was crashing in on her.  

Lying on her bed, she decided to ly as to have half of her body suspended over the ground making it visible to see under her bed. Expecting to see nothing, it caught her eye to see a book tattered with dust visible. Amanda got off the bed and reached underneath and grabbed it.  The book in fact wasn’t a book at all. When Amanda opened it, she noticed it was a journal. Fine handwriting covered most of the pages that she saw. Looking at the first page she saw it was Frederick's with his name written in fine cursive . Her first instinct was to put it back but natural curiosity took over her greater good. Scrolling through some of the writings, she saw dates dating back to 1878. As she went to the very end of the book, she saw the date end in 1880. Many dates were skipped heading from week to week. but one date caught her eye. Some of the writing was in bold font and exclamation was expressed.  Giving one quick look at her door to make sure no one was snooping around, she began to read

28th January  1878

My future is set! WHAT DID WE DO TO DESERVE THIS? Was it our lack of understanding, our no common knowledge, or were we the ones looked down upon. It couldn’t have failed but it did.  I can’t see a bright light ahead of me, but too be certain this will not happen again.  Dunsby, I’m angry at you, but I can’t  show it for you mother taught us better. May someday I see you again.

Amanda’s eyes filled with tears. Now she knew. She wasn't angry at Frederick. She was scared. She knew why he wanted her to leave, despite her differences. That didn’t matter now. All she wanted to do was hug her dad and be embraced in his arms. Amanda dropped the book and scurried to her father’s study. When she appeared however, Frederic was gone...

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Do you guys like Amanda? I don't want you guys to be following a character you don't like.

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