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Here it is! Hope you like it!
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Natalie Kabra
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The soft beeping of the high-tech computer ( courtosy of her brother Ian) woke Natalie Kabra up. She slid out of bed and clicked on the iNCOMING I.M MESSAGE button.

          Hey Nat, heard u were in Boston - NinjaDan
          What time do u call this?!- Fashionista39
          Just wanted to chat with u :) -NinjaDan
         At 2 am? - Fashionista39
           Listen, do you... i'll just call u later- NinjaDan
           NINJADAN HAS SIGNED OUT
           Wait!- Fashionista39
Natalie slipped into her bed. She could not stop smiling at Dan's need to call her at 2 am. Her last thought before she dropped into her dreams was NinjaDan... I like the sound of that.

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Please comment!! I hope u liked it!!
 
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It's funny!!! Keep going!!!
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Holy Cheezcakes!! This is awesome!! Can you continue??
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Emma-Le

 

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Hamilton Holt is my sweet cinnamon roll child<3

 

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Any one? Well, I'll still continue later.
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mwahaha! this is interesting! I like it! :) Thanks for supporting my fanfic on nat and dan!
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Sir Random, King of the Realm of the Croissants, Knight of the Oval-ish table ;D

Dude! That's SO TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

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Liked it? LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Dan Cahill was sitting on his balcony of he and his sister's, Amy, house. His laptop was next to him. He could not help but smile at Natalie's I.M messages. Classic Kabra,he thought. He started flipping through possible things to say to her when he would call her later. "Do you want to go out for pizza?" NO WAY!! "Do you want to grab pizza?" Way too casual. And nothing that sounded like a family get together either. Because they did not need another one of those for a while. : Do you and Ian want to grab some pizza afterschool? I can bring Amy, if you'd like?" Yes. It was perfect. Dan allowed him self to shout "YES!!" into the Attlebero landscape.
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Thanks 4 ur feedback! I'll post often. This post and my first post is a chapter. I'll try to post chapters together from now on. Do u think my writting is good for a 10 year old? 
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You are a BOSS 10 yr old writer! :)
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Sir Random, King of the Realm of the Croissants, Knight of the Oval-ish table ;D

Dude! That's SO TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

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its funny and cool please please keep writing
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Layne Cahill

Demigod

Percabeth forever!

Hunter of Artemis

Daughter of Poseidon

Dauntless Divergent

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It's fantastic for a ten year old!!!!!!!!!! I know, I have a 10 yr old sibiling. :P Anyways, this made me laugh so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!! I especially love Natalie's chat name. :) Please keep it up!
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Be confident, be strong, be kind, be yourself

Loki: I am a god, you dull creature, and I will not be bullied by...

*Hulk repeatedly smashes Loki*

Hulk: Puny God

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Thanks 4 all of your feedback! -------------------------- Natalie kabra --------------------- " Natalie! Wake up! " " Leave me Alone" " Dan just called. He wanted to see if we could grab some pizza later. Amys' coming too." Natalie's mind cleared instanly at the sound of Dan's name. Then she hated herself for it. She could see that Ian was grinning ear to ear. " you are just smiling because YOU get to see Amy!" challenged Natalie. " No, I'm grinning because Dan called you. Daniel Cahill called you and you are not freaking out!! I thinks that's called puppy love
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Oops! I pressed submit before it was finished! I will post the next one l8ter.PROMISE!
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Wow *mouth dangles open* Are you sure your 10? * mouth dangles open again*
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" I think that's called puppy love!" said Ian. " I'm going to see what's taking so long with the breakfast." said Natalie, in order so that Ian woudn't see her face turn red. What is this feeling I'm feeling for Dan? she thought. Whatever it is, I'm positive it isn't hatred!
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Hi!
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Dan wan nervously pacing his room when Natalie's answer came. " Yes!" she had said. He did a victory dance. ( Author's note:LOL!!) Mid-dance, Hamiliton Hold walked in. Dan froze in place. " Uh.. Hi Ham!!" " What was that about?" asked Hamiltion. " Oh, nothing, you know, just..stuff!" "ookkayy" said Hamilton as he backed out the door. Dan breathed a sigh of relief. Just then the doorbell rang. Natalie and Ian had arrived
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Natalie had took 2 showers, put on casual makeup, and dressed normal for once. All for Dan. Relax she told herself it's not like a date or anything.. The dinner was good, for American standereds. Well, until robbers broke in. Not just robbers. Vespers. Ian and Amy were gone at the moment, so it was just her and Dan. They were both yanked back and were led to the parking lot. " Dan!Dan! DAN!!" Natalie cried. She knew she ccouldn't hear him. " Shut up, girl." rasped an oddly familer voice. But Natalie coudn't put her hand on it, not when she needed to be rescued.
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SUSPENCE!!!! The next chapeter is very, very, good and it is super dramitic. BE PREPARED FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! 
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OKAY YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND YOU MUST CONTINUE ASAP
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PLEASE WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hunger Games fan!

Katniss the Girl on Fire!

 

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write more now please!! just for me!
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Hunger Games fan!

Katniss the Girl on Fire!

 

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Continue!
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Hi!! Thanks 4 your feedback!
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Dan Cahill was having the time of his life. Until the Vespers came. Why do the Vespers have to ruin EVERYTHING I care about? I won't be able to play video games tonight!! Now he was in a van, driving away from the pizza place. Bound and gagged, he extended his arms and felt around caustiosly. That proved to be useless, as he smacked a Vesper in the face.
The Vesper shot him in the leg. ow,ow,ow,ow,ow, OWOWOW!!! This is worse then coming across a glitch in Pokemon!! So he resorted to his nose to figure out his surroundings. He smelled...perfume. A scent that was familer to him, because Amy puts it on before dates with Evan. But this was...different. He let his thoughts stray to Natalie, and his stomach sank. What would they do to her? Then it hit him. The perfume was Isabel's. Isabel Kabra.
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CLIFFHANGER!!! I wil continue if this story will get more popular. Please spread the word!!! Natalie's P.O.V will also uncover an person in the van. ( hint, there are many Cobras in this chapter)

Please give feedback!!

 
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I really like it write more
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This is worse then coming across a glitch in Pokemon!!  SO FUNNY!!!!!! I was laughing histerically! :)
BTW I did do a post that advertises your fanfic...hope more people can be exposed to your awesome writing!
Can you possible do a post for...a fan of yours...who writes as well...with the same topic...OK FINE...ME?! :P
Thanks! 8) 
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Dude! That's SO TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

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OMG!! I would love to!!!
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i like the dan and natlie storyes. go dan and natile. i hope somthing happenes to them in the real book. ya know between natile and dan.


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Woo-hoo! I just read the first three chapters and LOVED them! I'm not much of a Dannat fan but this is wonderful! Like the others said, I can't believe you're ten! You write better then some sixteen-year-olds I've seen before!

You definitely have to keep writing! Keep up the amazing work! This story is awesome! :D

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Ok, I will write more soon, things have been popping up. Please spread the word and thanks for the feedback!!
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LONG LIVE DanNat!!!!
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keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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plz keep writing!
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Layne Cahill

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Percabeth forever!

Hunter of Artemis

Daughter of Poseidon

Dauntless Divergent

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Your story is awesome! I'm 12 and I can't write like that! You are awesome!
Go Janus  
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Signatures are for losers. Darn it that was a signature. Whatevs.

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Nice
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This makes me want to sing a song. Dan and Natalie Sitting in a tree Kissing. 1 comes love. 2 comes marrige. 3 comes the baby in the baby carriage. That is definitly love. I know. it has happened to me
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                                                        All people are the cahill family         

                  One Direction is awesome!!! What makes you beautiful is AWESOME!!!

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Awsome. I LOVE it. It reminds me of myself. That is not cool though.
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                                                        All people are the cahill family         

                  One Direction is awesome!!! What makes you beautiful is AWESOME!!!

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Wow. Super job on the story!

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Jade (final change)

 

Forum Twins: Fiona and Amber 

 

#WingsOfFireFan

 

"Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant, filled with odd waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like." - Lemony Snicket

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Wow. Super job on the story!

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Jade (final change)

 

Forum Twins: Fiona and Amber 

 

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Cool!

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          I WALK AROUND LIKE

          EVERYTHING IS FINE, BUT

          DEEP DOWN, INSIDE MY

          SHOE, MY SOCK IS 

          SLIDING OFF.

 

NICOLE JASMINE KABRA ststststststststststststs

 

#Keep39CluesAlive

#NeymarForTheWin

#Danatalie 

 

 

 

 

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I read your story loved it

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