Hey guys. This is my first story here on the MB, it's called Trapped! I'm not that great of a writer, but I'm doing this to become a better writer. I hope you guys like it. Any constructive criticism would be great.
When the Cahill Family Reunion started, Amy Cahill was terrified. This was the first one they'd had since Grace died, and she was sure she was going to make it perfect.
“Dan! Come down! The Family Reunion is starting!” Amy called.
“No! I’m not coming down! Atticus and I are playing video games!” Dan called back.
“You better be down in five minutes!”
“No way! I’m just about to beat my high score!”
Amy sighed, “Okay, I guess I’ll go tell Nellie not to give you dessert!”
Just then Dan and Atticus rushed down the stairs. “We’re here!” Dan said.
“Good, now go in there with everybody else.”
Amy decided to find Sinead. Sinead had been her only friend since the clue hunt, and Dan only had Atticus. Amy wished they could have normal childhoods, but when you’re a Cahill it’s kinda hard to be normal.
“Hey Amy.” said a voice from behind her. It was Cara. Amy had invited Cara because she had helped them a lot defeating Pierce, and she was technically a Cahill. An Ekat to be specific.
“Hey Cara. So, why aren’t you with Ian?” Amy asked.
“Oh, I was just about to ask you where he was.” Cara replied.
“He’s over there arguing with Nellie about the food.”
“Classic Ian. Thanks!”
“Hi Sinead.” Amy said.
“So-” Just then Amy was interrupted by something. It sounded like an alarm. Suddenly, some kind of gas started filling the room and then, everything went black.
Hope you guys enjoyed it! ~ Sarah
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