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blueraven450

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Darkness is like a flame engulfing the soul,

Like the night winning over the day,

Like the lights when your power is out.

Darkness is the path to your worst nightmares,

The monster under your bed,

The ghost in your closet,

The creepy clown in the movie you saw,

Or in the book you read.

Darkness, it inflames you like the flame in your heart,

For someone you love very much.

 

Wow. I didn't even know I could do that. A note for Bracha if she reads this: Don't worry. I'm fine.

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Hey, don't worry about. You should see my poems... I think you should go to Lucy's post called  "For anyone suffering with depression, come here." All of mine are there.

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lost soul

 

 

Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds 

                                                                                                                              

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Sure. I'll read them.

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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Branch: Lucian

Bracha! The first poem you wrote on Lucy's topic was so good! I can even make a song out of it!! You should actually send it to The New Yorker!!!! ~ Jin

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

If you make it into a song, I want to hear it. But no sending it anywhere, unless i do it anonymously. 

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Fine with me.

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

But most of my poems are going to be part of a book I'm writing with my friend so it will probably get published like that... I have a poem that is not so good, think you can fix it?

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Fix it how?

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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Branch: Lucian

You're poem is amazing and your story is even better, wow Jin

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Branch: Lucian

Cyclonecandy39- Thanks. *Turns a little red*

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Name: Jin H. Cahill.

 

Someone's saying, "The name's Jin. Deal with it." It was me.

 

 I look as if my day is bright,

but deep in the depths of my mind

the darkest thoughts linger.

 

Avenger

Jedi

Complicated

GoCats

Vampire

Bookworm

Cahill

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butterflyamber887

Branch: Lucian

Aww you two are adorable! And i mean kind of take the basic plot of the poem and rewrite it.

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What, do you mean me and Jin?

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Um.. maybe... I will post poem tomorrow maybe.

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lost soul

 

 

Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds