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Faro

 

 

Our shuttle starts to take off but something tugs at me, the Force saying it's not time to go yet.
"We gotta stay Merleah. I think the Force is telling us to take the Queen with us."
I could see it was a conflicting battle in her, either we go back for the Queen and risk us getting captured or killed or we could take off now, far away from Imperial presence. Friends came first.
But it only took a few seconds to answer with a firm nod.

 

 


Racing back to the palace from the landing zone, we could see blaster fire coming from inside.
"You find Ravonna, I'll guard our way out!" I shouted over the noise and Leah took off sprinting again but almost ran into Ravonna and her entourage on the way in!
"To the transport!" the Queen yelled, pointing to a large ship in the distance.
I looked back at our ship and could see it would not work, fitting over fifteen royal guards, handmaidens and servants.
"Where are the rest of your people?" I asked aloud.
"Dead because they are loyal to Naboo or alive because they are loyal to the Empire," Ravonna answered.
I didn't need to ask how many were loyal to the Empire when dozens of guards and servants were running behind alongside the Imperial garrison that had been deployed.
"Cover us Merleah!" I yelled and instantly we started to scatter through garden hedges.
Fire raged around us from the blaster bolts and smoke arose from the charred grass.
TIE fighters roared from above, probably deployed from the Star Destroyers.
We were connected with the Force so we could feel what it was telling Merleah and I to do.
"Lightsaber!" I shouted and she tossed her violet saber so I could deflect the blaster fire from the enemy.
Four loyalist to the Queen fell while we made our escape, but more on the Empires side fell from our fire.
"Almost there! Don't stop now!" I shouted, trying to encourage the others.
We both sensed it right away, the roar of two TIES coming in from above the clouds to destroy our transport.
Merleah and I locked eyes and we both flung our lightsabers using the Force towards one wing on both TIES.
The aqua green and violet blades spun through the air and found their marks.
They crashed behind us with searing heat escaping from both of them, jolting us with the heat blast.
Bay doors opening, I let off three rounds from my blaster and deflected the incoming E-11 blaster rifle shots until all the exhausted loyalists to the Queen were safely aboard.
Flying into the pilots seat my hands danced over the controls, plotting the fastest hyperspace jump ever.
"Strap in!" I roared and the transports engines fired up, lifting us quickly into space above Naboo right into the turret sights of the a Star Destroyers.
It fired one shot but that was all it could before we disappeared into the vortex.

 

 

It was hours before anyone actually really talked. The former servants and guards of the Theed palace were sprawled across the transports, some straight out sobbing from being betrayed by their own and the friends they lost, while others were just misty eyed and going on how the Empire would pay.
I stepped away from my chair, finding Leah comforting Ravonna who was quietly sobbing.
"Thought you'd want this back," I said softly while I handed her the violet lightsaber.
"Take this one than. All Jedi's need one and besides, I like the violet one better," she answered cracking a smile and handing me the aqua green.
"What happens now?" I asked.
"She obviously can't go back to Naboo and these people are traitors to the Empire. Her status as Queen doesn't mean anything now. Never did when Palpatine took over," she answered solemnly, looking at Ravonna sadly for that moment.
Nodding I stated back, "Now they are under our protection along with Ten's resistance."
"Very true but speaking of Ten, he's gonna wanna hear about this right away Faro. Take us back home."

 

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Merleah

 

I sit in silence and sigh. I rub my head and walk to the back of the ship looking out the window. It's gone. Everything I hold close is with the empire. Faro's all I got left. I go sit next to him and sigh."Your it."

"What?"

"Your all i have left...." I sigh and look down."My homes gone, Its all gone." I rub my head and sigh. "Let's go home... please." He nods and goes into hyperspace.

 

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Hey Merleah, would you like to write the second to last pov? About Ten's rebels and us fighting the last two Inquisitors. I felt like it would be a great climax to the story, so then we could give Merleah and Faro a happy ending until they maybe help the Rebellion after Luke Skywalker destroys the Death Star. We could do adventures with them after they defeat the two Inquisitors if you want. Maybe them starting up their own Jedi temple because their son is force sensative, or they find a child.

 

Plot:

 

Chapter 10: The end of the beginning 

 

We get back from Naboo and our called in by Ten. He tells us that they have intel on where the last tow Inquisitors are. The most powerful of the order. Both on Mustafar. It is probably a trap but one we have to set. All combat personal are called to attack the planet, including Ahsoka.

We get there and it is a trap, many Star Destroyers surround the planet and a space battle begins while Noble Team and three of the Jedi are taken to the surface, two Grand Inquisitors await with Lord Vader by their side.

The final battle has begun, not all will live to see the end of it.

 

 

So yeah that was just my idea, you can do the first or second part of the battle if you want or do it all! I just didn't want to take it all. Then after that I thought we could skip ahead a few years, give them a semi happy ending just like they always wanted. :)

 

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Sorry I'm not exactly sure what to write?

 

What are doing again? I forget.

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Its ok.

 

I was thinking we could make the story come to an epilogue by having Merleah and Faro defeat the last two Inquisitors on the planet Mustafar. But Darth Vader shows up and Ahsoka takes him on and all of Ten's forces are there to fight the Empire. I thought it would be like the last battle for them or something before we ultimately defeat them(not Vader) but they lose all of their friends which makes them go into hiding with Faro's parents, giving them a semi happy ending until they are to action again years later.

 

Just an idea. I was asking because I didn't want to pov everything and leave you with nothing.

I could just do the last battle and you do the epilogue part, where you pov about what happened after the battle. Maybe they get married? Adopt a force using child or have one. 

 

Its not like I want to end this series but I feel like if we go on any further without defeating the Inquistors, which was our mission on along, it will just drag on.

 

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I agree and I like that idea. I can write the Battle I think but if you want to add mroe to it your welcome too!

 

Merleah

 

We had landed back and told everyone the news. I could sense everyone was ready for a fight. They wanted this to be over. I quickly leave the room to my room and pace. What to do? We have to take down the last Inquisitors. That's not an option. I sigh okay semi plan and I'll keep going. I grab my saber and begin to gather my outfit for war.

"Merleha what are you doing?" I look at Faro and sigh.

"It's time Faro. We have to defeat the last two.... no matter what the cost is."

"ou know where they are?"

"Mustafar."

"They won't be alone."

"No, but we have a rebellion behind us." He nods and I look at the saber on his belt."After this I'm taking you to a jedi temple. You can make your own saber then." He smiles at that and I chuckle.

"Well come on. Ten's got to agree." He nods and hand in hand we walk out to Ten. I tell him the plan and asked for his help. Ten thinks for a second and then nods.

"It's time to end this." Ahsoka was coming too. I wore my war outfit, looking a bit like Ahsoka in the style, and look at Faro when I come out.

"Ready?"

"No. But we have too." I smile at him.

"Hey we've got each others backs. Nothing will go wrong."

.............

 

We land on Mustafar and I glance around. I had been here before. Burnt my hand. I hate hot weather. I walk out first from my ship and Faro comes out behind me. It's quiet too quiet. I suddenly here blasters going off above us. Thsi is it. Our last Battle, and one on the most dreadful planet in the galaxy....

 

I close my eyes and begin to sense where to go. I pause feeling something familiar. Ahsoka knows it too. Vadars here. SHe'll get him. I jerk my head to Faro."THis way." We walk around and head inside a huge building, probably ocntrols the laza intake. I grab my saber and prepare for an attack. I glance at Faro, he felt it too. Somehting was here and almost waiting for us. Suddenly I hear a click and freeze. I stepped on a trap If I move something will happen.

"Faro back up and force throw me foreward." He looks at me concerned but does so. Once my pressures off a cage fell right where we would have been. Faro quickly cuts through it back to me. I look around hearing noise outside. We need to hurry.

 

 

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